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Until the night three months ago, when Alice appeared at her house, in
tears and utterly miserable Helena had thought she had found that love.
Because Alice was like her, she knew what it was to be constantly
judged, thought to be just one thing and nothing else, although instead
of a ***** she was considered a practical joker, unable to have serious
emotions for another human being. Though Helena knew that was the
furthest thing from the truth.
She thought that she and Alice truly would be together because they
knew… they knew what it was like to be dismissed and thrown aside and
as such they would never do that to each other. But then Dana came to
her with words of love and regret and once again, Helena found herself
playing the role of the interloper.
The thief of love or some other ridiculous notion. How can you steal
love, after all? Why was it that Dana’s love for Alice was seen as
somehow more valid than hers? Because Dana had been there first? Why
was that? Dana had left Alice, abandoned her and left her in a state of
emotional agony. Helena had every right to love Alice and express that
love as much as Dana surely did. Alice was the first person, the only
person, to see Helena for who she really was.
The only one who stood up to Peggy when she was on one of her nonstop
diatribes, insulting everything Helena did. The only one who had the
nerve to hang up on Winnie when she was complaining at Helena for
aimless petty things simply to have something to complain at Helena
about. The only one who saw the hurt that plainly lurked beneath the
surface of her frosty exterior and wipe it out with a loving word and
tender touch.
Alice was Helena’s love and though she tried so hard and so long to
deny it, especially in light of their current circumstances, Helena
couldn’t find the energy anymore. Why should she hide her feelings?
Just like Dana, she would now be fighting for the woman she loved and
for her own future happiness with her.
That’s why Helena rose up into Alice’s kiss, intensifying it and
sitting on the couch and entangling their limbs. Her body pressed into
the soft cushions, covered by the writer’s and her mouth open and
seeking, tasting everything Alice had to offer and wanting more. And
that’s exactly how Dana found them when she walked into the room just
seconds later.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!