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Seeing them stopped Dana in her tracks because Alice hadn’t kissed her
like that in months. Not since their break up and not since their three
month reconciliation. Kissed her deep and endless with such incredible
conviction of emotion you never once doubted what Alice was feeling you
just knew. You felt it in every nip, tug, bite, and low moan as Alice
sucked on your tongue, devouring you whole, as if trying to absorb you
into herself in a delicious expression of lust and love.
It was a kiss that said Alice Pieszecki loves you.
And Dana hadn’t received it in months. Or anything close to it as a
matter of fact. While the scene in front of her made it very clear that
Helena had. Which gave the athlete yet another reason to hate her.
Because Helena was being kissed in the way that said quite clearly that
Alice loved her. Of course she was being kissed that way. She never
broke Alice’s heart, she never caused the writer to fall into an
alarming downward spiral, she never inspired as much hate as love.
That distinguished honor belonged to Dana alone.
This
entire fucked up situation with Alice, her being torn between two women
and unable to choose, it was entirely of Dana’s making. That’s why she
supposed it was appropriate she suffer the most.
Still it didn’t stop her from hating Helena and wanting Alice to be
hers and hers alone once again. To kiss her and be kissed in the way
she was seeing now. This thought clear in her mind, Dana set the glass
of water down on a nearby file cabinet with a plunk and walked over to
the couch and stood before it, silently announcing her presence.
Though she was noticed, Dana wasn’t given much thought, especially by
Helena who was straining impatiently up into Alice, trying to have
their bodies connect as closely as humanly possible. Wanting every inch
of her covered by the welcome weight of Alice pressing down into her.
Drowning in the sensation and unwilling to even consider for a moment
the possibility of it leaving her. She had lost far too much in her
life and Helena wasn’t going to lose this glorious feeling of absolute
love, want, and acceptance as well.
When Alice pulled back, eyes shining dark with desire as she looked up
at Dana, the heiress moved with her. Sitting upright, the blonde
perched in her lap, and kissing the curve of Alice’s neck, ignoring the
upward motion that told her without looking that Alice was kissing Dana.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!