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Especially when she loved them both so very much.
The
decision seemed impossible and each day that passed it got harder not
only because of Dana pushing for an answer and Helena withdrawing
emotionally from her but because she just didn’t know what to do. She
was hurting everyone. Herself, Dana, Helena… she was causing this and
she knew it and she wanted it to stop and she wanted to choose.
But still, she somehow couldn’t.
And the reality of that tormented Alice enough to make her fall back on
the age old habit she and thousands of other lovelorn souls had for
getting fabulously drunk to forget their problems. Even if it was only
temporary respite at the very best.
Which leads us up to current events with Alice perched on her favorite
barstool at The Palms as she drank her fifteenth or perhaps sixteenth
Long Island Iced Tea while talking aimless drunken babble to Tabitha,
the longtime bartender.
“And
you know, I love ‘em,” Alice squinted and halfway slurred as she looked
at Tabitha and wondered why there was now two of her. Had she gotten
cloned by George W and his minions of evil? “But the baby is messy…
and it makes poopy *****… it’s a messy poopy ***** baby.”
“Babies do tend to be both messy and produce the poopiest of *****,”
remarked Tabitha humorously, cleaning out a glass. “I think that’s
their purpose.”
“Their purpose is to make poopy *****?” pondered Alice, sticking her
index finger into her glass and scooping up the bits of frozen tequila
on the edge of it. Sucking on her finger thoughtfully, she tilted her
head back as the old and nearly broken down jukebox in the corner began
playing the ultimate in tortured ***** romance songs. Which was
entirely appropriate for Alice at the moment, even if she was a
tortured bisexual and not a *****. Spinning halfway on her barstool
and holding up her glass to no one in particular, Alice sang, “Are you
so strong or is it the weakness in me? Why do you come here and pretend
to be just passing by?”
Narrowing her eyes in slight amusement, Tabitha sighed, “She’s singing.”
Crouching down, she looked through the box of random items where she
had placed Alice’s cell phone. When the blonde first appeared in the
bar she had declared she was going to be getting royally wasted, her
words exactly, and handed the phone over to Tabitha. Saying that when
she started singing was when the bartender should call someone to pick
her up. Although she hadn’t mentioned the fact that she would be
singing along to sad ***** ballads.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!