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Turn About Is Fair Play – CH83
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Kits eyes widened and she put and two and two together. Oooh! Now I get it. Youre seeing her huh?
Yeah, it started when I was in New York.
Shes beautiful, talented, and seems to have it going on, so whats the problem? Kit sounded very motherly.
Bette sighed and as much as she wanted to downplay how she was feeling, she knew Kit would clue in. Its like this, Bette leaned in closer. Its kind of hard to explain, Bette paused to gather her thoughts. Shes great in bed. Shes a great businesswoman, and we work well together.
But? Kit knew there was one.
It seems like shes always on my case, Bette frowned.
Kit couldnt help but laugh. She knew what that meant and she teleported a high five to Rayne. Oh, my poor baby sis, Kit teased, youve finally met your match and you cant handle it. Isnt that the real deal?
Bette looked away; she didnt want to admit the truth.
Well?
Okay, youre right. Happy now? Bette angrily replied.
Hey, dont get all cranky with me missy. Im not the one who thinks their ***** dont stink; lest you forget it does.
Strike three!
Damn you Kit, I thought you of all people would understand. You dont like being told anything, Bette fired back.
Ordinarily Kit would have reacted badly, but fortunately for Bette, Kit wasnt about to digress her demeanor, recomposed herself, and prepared to lay Bette out.
First of all Elizabeth, Kit hit her with the formal stick. This is not about me, so you might wanna put that tude of yours in check. Second of all, stop playing the damn victim. Youre a spoiled brat and you cant take it when someone calls you out; never could! Bette refused to look at Kit, but that didnt stop the lashing. And thirdly, you need someone in your life whos gonna say what you need to hear instead of pacifying you with yes, Bette, no Bette, whatever you say Bette. Theres only so much of that one can take, crossed her hands over her chest.
Bette sat silently as she tried to no avail to find an appropriate come back. Bette did hate being put in her place and wasnt used to being with someone whod do that without hesitation. Rayne was the dose of reality that Bette needed and the catalyst to making her see the error of her ways. Damn her! Bette mentally fussed, damn both of them! I dont need this ***** right now, she continued.
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Your writing is good, the story is good, but Nya with Tina is too sweet for me, and it’s clear you like Bette about as much as Jaded.
First 5 stars for you.
Can I see Rayne as a sort of teacher for Bette ? Bette needs to understand that she can’t have all she wants and if it’s difficult to understand it, it’s more difficult, perhaps painful to accept it. Is Rayne so good that Bette totally forgets Tina ? I love Bette but sometimes she can be the person I don’t like.
And I love Tina and Nya together because Nya seems giving some joy in Tina’s life.
Thank you for these two chapters.
Yippee!!
Am dancing around the room. Notheing and then two fabulous new chapter.
You have captured the love between Nya and Tina. Sweet thangs that they are. Still think that they are too alike for it to last. They need some tension to bring out the best in each other.
And as for Bette, brillant the way Kit is smacking her up inside her head and trying to knock some sense it. The time is ripe for Bette to see and admit her selfish ways then she can grow and make her way back to her one true soulmate Tina.
As always am exstatic by your posts. Am ready for the next post to see where this rollercoast will go next.
Cheers.
A fan.
another great chapter. and i like it that you have people telling bette how it is. somebody has to do it thats for sure!
Great writing. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
When will make Bette truly human and apologetic instead of the selfish twat you’ve portrayed for countless chapters now? First you have Tina and the gang (including her sister) point out her obvious flaws, now you have some new love interest doing the same. Why the Bette beating? Yeah, she’s no saint when it came to the affair, but neither is Tina or anyone else in this world. Sorry, but all this Bette hating is really hard to stomach after 83 chapters and you don’t have any plans on changing your opinions of her. Whatever, dude.
Hey Blu glad to see you are back in business ;0) I’m sitting quietly here in the shadow still enjoying the show you’ve put on. Frankly speaking I have pass that stage waiting to see if the B&T story line getting back together will materialize LOL. Personally I think your buildup is rock solid. You’ve pen it in such a manner that all the signs are up um hmm… not your “UNDER CONSTRUCTION†sign LOL instead you put up the “ROAD CLOSED†sign as far as B&T getting back together is concern which is fine by me cuz like I say your buildup supports this direction. But I sense something amiss though I don’t know how quite to put this. Seems to me you are making things between Nya and Tina way too sweet. I’m talking saccharine sweet here I feel something is missing it’s like these two are way too polite to each other. Perhaps it’s just me, perhaps I am trying too hard to read between the lines LOL or something and if you are wondering, NO I am not feeling this because the loving is between Tina and Nya not Bette. It’s not like I need convincing that Tina is really now seeing and taking Nya seriously it’ just that I have this nagging feeling that you are hiding something and just for this I can’t wait to see what you have in store next.
Thanks for this up-date…. More please!
I’m the one who go for your Nya and Tina. In fan fic anything can happen under your fingertips.