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Turn About Is Fair Play – CH83
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Check please! Bette called to their waiter.
So, its like that now? Kit questioned.
Yeah, Ive completely lost my appetite and think I need to go home.
Fine! Kit stood up, dont worry about taking me home, Ill catch a cab, Kit walked off in a huff.
When it rains/Raynes it ***** pours! Bette cursed out loud.
Bette paid the bill, called the valet, and sped off. By the time Bette reached home, she was still upset and strolled into the house, void of additional life. She wanted to call Rayne and spend the rest of the night with her, but opted against it because she couldnt take the possibility of a rejection. Instead she threw herself on the couch and wailed, its not fair. Its just not fair, she cried until she fell asleep.
The next morning
Hey angel, Nya kissed Tinas nose. I need to get going.
What time is it? Tina rubbed her eyes.
Almost 6:30. I hate to leave you so early, but I have a lot to do, Nya sat up in the bed.
Tina sat up too and looked longingly in Nyas eyes. You look even more beautiful than last night, she cooed.
Its too early for compliments, Nya blushed. I havent even brushed my teeth yet, she joked. You cant give compliments with bad breath my sister always says. They both laughed.
Thats funny, Tina nudged Nya. So, are you saying my compliment doesnt count?
Not at all. Id kiss you right now if youd let me.
***** yeah! Tina laughed and pulled Nya down on the bed. Where do you want them? Here? Tina pointed to Nyas *****. Here? Pointing to her stomach. Here? Pointing to her well-groomed garden.
Anywhere! Everywhere! Nya declared. You can do whatever you want with me. My body is your body, Nya flopped down and spread her arms and legs out.
Tina wasted no time asking any more questions and began kissing Nya everywhere until they ended up making love again.
Youre gonna make me late, Nya tried to complain, but got lost in the pleasure Tina was giving her.
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Your writing is good, the story is good, but Nya with Tina is too sweet for me, and it’s clear you like Bette about as much as Jaded.
First 5 stars for you.
Can I see Rayne as a sort of teacher for Bette ? Bette needs to understand that she can’t have all she wants and if it’s difficult to understand it, it’s more difficult, perhaps painful to accept it. Is Rayne so good that Bette totally forgets Tina ? I love Bette but sometimes she can be the person I don’t like.
And I love Tina and Nya together because Nya seems giving some joy in Tina’s life.
Thank you for these two chapters.
Yippee!!
Am dancing around the room. Notheing and then two fabulous new chapter.
You have captured the love between Nya and Tina. Sweet thangs that they are. Still think that they are too alike for it to last. They need some tension to bring out the best in each other.
And as for Bette, brillant the way Kit is smacking her up inside her head and trying to knock some sense it. The time is ripe for Bette to see and admit her selfish ways then she can grow and make her way back to her one true soulmate Tina.
As always am exstatic by your posts. Am ready for the next post to see where this rollercoast will go next.
Cheers.
A fan.
another great chapter. and i like it that you have people telling bette how it is. somebody has to do it thats for sure!
Great writing. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
When will make Bette truly human and apologetic instead of the selfish twat you’ve portrayed for countless chapters now? First you have Tina and the gang (including her sister) point out her obvious flaws, now you have some new love interest doing the same. Why the Bette beating? Yeah, she’s no saint when it came to the affair, but neither is Tina or anyone else in this world. Sorry, but all this Bette hating is really hard to stomach after 83 chapters and you don’t have any plans on changing your opinions of her. Whatever, dude.
Hey Blu glad to see you are back in business ;0) I’m sitting quietly here in the shadow still enjoying the show you’ve put on. Frankly speaking I have pass that stage waiting to see if the B&T story line getting back together will materialize LOL. Personally I think your buildup is rock solid. You’ve pen it in such a manner that all the signs are up um hmm… not your “UNDER CONSTRUCTION†sign LOL instead you put up the “ROAD CLOSED†sign as far as B&T getting back together is concern which is fine by me cuz like I say your buildup supports this direction. But I sense something amiss though I don’t know how quite to put this. Seems to me you are making things between Nya and Tina way too sweet. I’m talking saccharine sweet here I feel something is missing it’s like these two are way too polite to each other. Perhaps it’s just me, perhaps I am trying too hard to read between the lines LOL or something and if you are wondering, NO I am not feeling this because the loving is between Tina and Nya not Bette. It’s not like I need convincing that Tina is really now seeing and taking Nya seriously it’ just that I have this nagging feeling that you are hiding something and just for this I can’t wait to see what you have in store next.
Thanks for this up-date…. More please!
I’m the one who go for your Nya and Tina. In fan fic anything can happen under your fingertips.