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‘Yes, yes I am’
Her face as I’d said the words…
The eyes I thought I knew…
Could it be…
Could it just be…
That I had assessed wrong?
And that she wasn’t as happly with Jodi as I thought she was?
She started to make her way passed me, first with her eyes, than with her body, and suddenly my heart screamed out to her, with amazing strenght…
As much as I had tried to gather the strenght, I couldn’t… I couldn’t let her go without asking the question that had suddenly etched itself in my soul… The last question of hope…
‘Are you in love with Jodi?’
She turned around as in slow motion, the air thickening with every small movement, and looked upto me…
Her eyes were giving me the answer my soul was longing for, and the jittery organ in my chest jumped up, as she averted her eyes, thinking, pondering, while I awaited my judgement…
But as she looked back into my eyes, her lips spoke the opposite of what I had thought to see in the darkbrown… with her words shattering the heart I had laid out for her to have
‘Yes, I am’
Her eyes had left mine as I felt the cold spread, from my chest to my limbs, untill the tingling icy sensation reached my fingertips. The thickened air around me fell, causing a whirlpool of thoughts and emotions, a hurricane of despair…
The step I had to take to regain my balance had nothing to do with the drink I had had earlier, or even with the numbness that had spread, rapidly, over my body, and to my feet.
The strenght of the question I had asked, and the impact of its answer had brought the lump into my throat, that had caused me to get away from her as fast as I possibly could…
I inhaled sharply, knowing I had found my reason for trying to get intoxicated enough to forget my name… My eyes still closed, I let my fingers grasp the material of the couch underneath me… The couch on which, I now remembered more vividly, Jodi had put me…
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You did a beautiful job showing Tina’s thoughts and emotions bouncing back in forth between hope and despair. And then there is Bette waiting for Tina to wake up so she can tell her the truth.
Beautiful ending
Awesome!Thanks for taking your time, as this was beautiful. Except for having no reason for OMFG2 and OMFG3 in last nights episode I would prefer it having worked out this way. Look forward to your next post.
Doesn’t matter if this was late, it was wonderful to read. Your perspective is unique and helps fill in all those spaces we don’t get with IC. Thanks!
Loved the chapter. You have given us the feelings and words from our girls that IC failed to give. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us. Love it. Please continue to post “afters” for us.
Thank for taking time to post this story. I know that your time is limited so that makes the story even more amazing. I love how you bring out Tina’s emotions as she fights to not lose everything that is willing to come up as she finds her equilibrium.
Your writing and this story are soooo good. Absolutely awesome.
yea!!!!! you did it you did it! looking around… am i first? i think sooooo happy dancing!!! I think this story is so good, maybe IC should ask you to write some episode ;) just it will take a little ;) Good to read your post my friend and thanks so much for everything and your support during this hard time. Love ya
aaaawwww what a nice way to ‘endure’ a hangover. nicely written.
Hey JustLoveB+T, How wonderful to read how Tina’s sleep-over could have played out. Bette does love Jodi but her connection to Tina is a force of nature. It is primeval and passionate. Good to see that Bette and Jodi realized this before Tina woke up. Now if only this had been the start of Episode 5-06. From your fingers to IC’s eyes. Love it. Please continue your wonderful way with wordds soon. Much joy and appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
Youre back, this is great! Any chance u’ll be posting a new chapie on pretty woman anytime soon? please?
“Why the hell did my heart keep forgetting, for split seconds, that she wasn’t mine anymore?” So beautiful. Took my breath away.
Your stories are always so beautiful..**sigh**…I always smile when I see a new post from you! Let’s hope IC is taking notes!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts on how this could have played out on the show. Again, this was simply beautiful!
nice one…
Damn that was awesome and love it. Thanks!
Ohh yes – that was what we wantet in the first place – wish that would have happend in the episode – but us B & T fans have hope and we are stickint to it as well – it’s looks promising in season 5 so far ;O))) – post soon
It shouldve went this way, but someone, I wont mention the name, was determined to have drama…damn tina looked like she wanted to pass out when Bette said she was in love with Jodi, Bette always could make Tina swoon