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Unusual Meeting – Chapter 14
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Previously …
As she returned to the patrol car, Bette again tried to calm down. She didn’t like Tina seeing her like this. It had been one of those nights.
Her shift was over and Bette was driving them home. Bette hadn’t said much as they drove home. It was Tina who broke the silence. “You know baby, you were so worried about me seeing another side of you. I’m glad I did. I saw you in action at a major scene, saw you get frustrated with a woman who can’t decide what she wants, but mostly I saw you show your protective instincts and compassion to a sweet little girl. And all these things I saw tonight just made me love you that much more.”
Bette woke up the next morning as Tina gently caressed her cheek. “Come on baby, time to get up and go run.”
“Noooooo, I don’t want to” was Bette’s child-like response.
“Why not? I thought you always ran in the mornings?”
“It’s my day off. I just wanna stay in my nice soft bed curled up with my beautiful girlfriend. Ok?” She waited for an answer as Tina just looked at her. “Pleeeeeeeease.”
“Ok. But I don’t want to stay here all day. I want you to take me for a ride on the bike later. Agreed?”
“Your wish is my command. After a few more minutes right here.” Bette pulled Tina close to snuggle with her. Tina relaxed against her, thoroughly enjoying this time with just the two of them.
“I want a picture of us together” Tina told her.
“Alright, anything in particular you have in mind?”
“I’m not sure. I was thinking I want you in uniform, but I don’t want you to have to put it on during your day off. Maybe on the bike? Or just here in the living room. I really don’t care, I just want one.”
“Ok sweetie, no problem. I have a camera with a timer. And if that doesn’t work, I have plenty of friends.”
“I have a surprise for you” Tina baited her.
“What is it?” Bette was interested.
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You did a very good job if this was your firs NC-17 i can’t imagine the others one! write is not a easy thing but write in the way you did not everybody can do it! congrats and keep going!
Yes that was great
Yep, this was HOT for your first time! I agree with Lamentamini, some NC-17s can make you doze off, but this was a great effort. Can’t wait for the morning after!!
Love this fic…. Bette in uniform HOT! I wonder how Tina will be able to go back home after this. Post real soon.
Damn thats hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more of them, and funny about the dog. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow, that was very good. You did well. I can’t write so when someone puts themselves out there I respect them for trying. This was great.
after this night they both definately need some time off…great chapter
This was good…hard to believe it was your 1st time writing one. Glad they finally did the nasty…I’m sorry I mean make love. Can’t wait for your next post.
you did GREAT your first time i heard there not easy to do……… i was soooooooo hoping you would have time to post tonite or sunday.please keep it cuming lady.YOUR WIFE IS A VERY LUCKY WOMEN!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT
Yup. Lament is correct. Some NC-17s are so boring that either I kind of doze or just skip and go back to the main page. That didn’t happen w/yours. :-)
sweetttttttt
Too funny, dogs are howling at B&T’s fireworks!
good job for your first time. thanks.
I’m glad they (and you) waited until the time was right. It was great. The earth moved- for all of us! Thanks!
Great job for a first time -17. dogs howling, love it. More please., love your story.
Nice job. It is difficult to write NC-17s. Too much crude detail and they seem cheesy, too little and they seem bleh. It was a very credible effort for your first time. Write some more. They say practice makes perfect or perfect practice makes perfect. LOL. ;-)
(They were both too wrapped up in themselves to notice the neighbors’ dogs howling in response to Tina’s screams.) OMFG that sounds like my landlord’s dogs. I hear them howling out of nowhere and I know siren is going off not too far from me. azmama is correct in that perfect practice makes perfect. No one gets better by practicing mistakes. I think it was pretty good for your first NC-17. I didn’t doze off which is good (yes, have felt myself doze off while reading an NC-17).
The slow burn was totally worth it. I can’t wait to see how they work out the living arrangements!!
You did good for your first NC-17….it was hot, but great if the post was longer, I would have like to read about Tina pleasing Bette for the first time…..post soon please, this is a very sweet and romantic story.
*swallowing*
Where did I put that other fan??!!??