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Unusual Meeting – Chapter 14
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Bette’s right hand slowly worked it’s way down Tina’s stomach to her thighs. She caressed the inside of each thigh before placing her hand on Tina’s mound. She could feel that the material of her thong was soaked, indicating Tina’s approval of their activities this far. Bette hooked her right index finger under the side of the only article of clothing remaining on Tina’s body. With great care she began to pull the material downward and remove it from her body.
Bette tossed the item over her shoulder, not wanting to look away for one second. She again gazed at Tina’s body, now able to fully appreciate the view she had of every aspect. She could see the wetness between her legs, as it coated her outer lips and upper thighs.
She continued the tradition of each time she separated from Tina, she returned to kiss her mouth. The kiss was intense, sending electricity jolting through both their bodies. Bette’s right hand again found it’s way down Tina’s body to her jewel. She slid her fingers through her folds and gasped at the pool of liquid she found there. Tina was definitely enjoying what Bette was doing to her.
As they continued to kiss, Bette gently entered Tina with one finger. She could feel the warmth envelop her finger. Slowly she moved in and out, as Tina’s hips unconsciously began to match her rhythm. Bette eased another finger inside Tina and continued the motion she had started. She moved her lips down Tina’s neck back to her breast. She again sucked on Tina’s nipples as her hand continued to stimulate the rest of her. Bette started to massage Tina’s clit with her thumb as she drew slow circles around it.
As Bette added a third finger, she again moved her mouth further down Tina’s body. She replaced her thumb with her mouth as she sucked Tina’s clit. Tina had been writhing on the bed, moaning extensively. At this most recent turn of events she screamed, “Oh baby, oh babyyyyyyyyyyyy.”
When Bette knew the time was just right, she curled her middle finger to touch Tina’s g-spot, effectively sending her into oblivion. “Betttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee” she cried as her orgasm overtook her.
(They were both too wrapped up in themselves to notice the neighbors’ dogs howling in response to Tina’s screams.)
Bette moved back up to kiss her again. Tina could taste herself in Bette’s kiss. “That ….. was ….. incredible” Tina managed to get out, once her breath finally came back to her.
“You were incredible” Bette told her.
“No baby, that was all you.”
“It only gets better from here babe.”
“I don’t think it could get any better” Tina told her.
“That sounds like a challenge. Do you know how much I like a challenge?” Bette asked.
“No baby, tell me. Better yet, show me” Tina’s tone was seductive.
And the rest of their night was spent making love, back and forth, each pleasuring the other until they both passed out from sheer exhaustion.
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You did a very good job if this was your firs NC-17 i can’t imagine the others one! write is not a easy thing but write in the way you did not everybody can do it! congrats and keep going!
Yes that was great
Yep, this was HOT for your first time! I agree with Lamentamini, some NC-17s can make you doze off, but this was a great effort. Can’t wait for the morning after!!
Love this fic…. Bette in uniform HOT! I wonder how Tina will be able to go back home after this. Post real soon.
Damn thats hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more of them, and funny about the dog. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow, that was very good. You did well. I can’t write so when someone puts themselves out there I respect them for trying. This was great.
after this night they both definately need some time off…great chapter
This was good…hard to believe it was your 1st time writing one. Glad they finally did the nasty…I’m sorry I mean make love. Can’t wait for your next post.
you did GREAT your first time i heard there not easy to do……… i was soooooooo hoping you would have time to post tonite or sunday.please keep it cuming lady.YOUR WIFE IS A VERY LUCKY WOMEN!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT
Yup. Lament is correct. Some NC-17s are so boring that either I kind of doze or just skip and go back to the main page. That didn’t happen w/yours. :-)
sweetttttttt
Too funny, dogs are howling at B&T’s fireworks!
good job for your first time. thanks.
I’m glad they (and you) waited until the time was right. It was great. The earth moved- for all of us! Thanks!
Great job for a first time -17. dogs howling, love it. More please., love your story.
Nice job. It is difficult to write NC-17s. Too much crude detail and they seem cheesy, too little and they seem bleh. It was a very credible effort for your first time. Write some more. They say practice makes perfect or perfect practice makes perfect. LOL. ;-)
(They were both too wrapped up in themselves to notice the neighbors’ dogs howling in response to Tina’s screams.) OMFG that sounds like my landlord’s dogs. I hear them howling out of nowhere and I know siren is going off not too far from me. azmama is correct in that perfect practice makes perfect. No one gets better by practicing mistakes. I think it was pretty good for your first NC-17. I didn’t doze off which is good (yes, have felt myself doze off while reading an NC-17).
The slow burn was totally worth it. I can’t wait to see how they work out the living arrangements!!
You did good for your first NC-17….it was hot, but great if the post was longer, I would have like to read about Tina pleasing Bette for the first time…..post soon please, this is a very sweet and romantic story.
*swallowing*
Where did I put that other fan??!!??