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Unusual Meeting – Chapter 14
Bette stood up from the couch with Tina still in her arms. She carried her toward the bedroom, stopping just outside the door. “T?” Tina just nodded at her. “Just for the record, this is the seduction scene.”
Tina’s smile brightened the entire hall, as she moved to press her lips to Bette’s again. Bette walked the next few steps into the bedroom, still kissing Tina. Bette stood still at the foot of the bed. They stopped kissing and Tina looked around. There were candles lit all around the room, soft music was playing in the background and then she looked at the bed. The sheets were pulled back and the bed was covered in rose petals. (Bette also had the good sense to take the phone off the hook and turn off her cell phone. There would be no interruptions tonight.)
“Baby, this is so perfect” Tina’s voice cracked, as she was overcome with emotion at the effort Bette had put into planning this.
“That’s the idea. A perfect evening for my perfect girlfriend.”
“I love you” Tina told her, fighting back her tears of joy.
“And I love you” Bette responded. “Is this ok? I mean, are you ready for this?” Bette was showing her insecurity.
“Yes, baby. I am more than ready for this.”
Bette put Tina down and they stood facing each other. Bette pulled Tina to her and reclaimed her lips. As they kissed, she lowered Tina onto the bed and straddled her; her knees on either side of her. She began kissing, licking and sucking her way down the side of her neck. Bette’s hands moved to the bottom of Tina’s shirt and pulled it from her waistband. She very slowly and carefully pulled the shirt up and over Tina’s head, stopping her lips’ journey down the neck only long enough to get the shirt off.
Her lips then continued the journey southward down Tina’s chest. She stopped at the top of her bra to kiss the flesh visible above the material. Bette’s hands ran over her stomach up to her breasts and gently caressed the underside of both through the bra.
Tina’s mind was racing, overcome with so much emotion. Her body was on fire and she could feel the wetness seeping from her core. I can’t believe I’m dripping and she hasn’t even touched me.
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(52 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
You did a very good job if this was your firs NC-17 i can’t imagine the others one! write is not a easy thing but write in the way you did not everybody can do it! congrats and keep going!
Yes that was great
Yep, this was HOT for your first time! I agree with Lamentamini, some NC-17s can make you doze off, but this was a great effort. Can’t wait for the morning after!!
Love this fic…. Bette in uniform HOT! I wonder how Tina will be able to go back home after this. Post real soon.
Damn thats hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more of them, and funny about the dog. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow, that was very good. You did well. I can’t write so when someone puts themselves out there I respect them for trying. This was great.
after this night they both definately need some time off…great chapter
This was good…hard to believe it was your 1st time writing one. Glad they finally did the nasty…I’m sorry I mean make love. Can’t wait for your next post.
you did GREAT your first time i heard there not easy to do……… i was soooooooo hoping you would have time to post tonite or sunday.please keep it cuming lady.YOUR WIFE IS A VERY LUCKY WOMEN!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT
Yup. Lament is correct. Some NC-17s are so boring that either I kind of doze or just skip and go back to the main page. That didn’t happen w/yours. :-)
sweetttttttt
Too funny, dogs are howling at B&T’s fireworks!
good job for your first time. thanks.
I’m glad they (and you) waited until the time was right. It was great. The earth moved- for all of us! Thanks!
Great job for a first time -17. dogs howling, love it. More please., love your story.
Nice job. It is difficult to write NC-17s. Too much crude detail and they seem cheesy, too little and they seem bleh. It was a very credible effort for your first time. Write some more. They say practice makes perfect or perfect practice makes perfect. LOL. ;-)
(They were both too wrapped up in themselves to notice the neighbors’ dogs howling in response to Tina’s screams.) OMFG that sounds like my landlord’s dogs. I hear them howling out of nowhere and I know siren is going off not too far from me. azmama is correct in that perfect practice makes perfect. No one gets better by practicing mistakes. I think it was pretty good for your first NC-17. I didn’t doze off which is good (yes, have felt myself doze off while reading an NC-17).
The slow burn was totally worth it. I can’t wait to see how they work out the living arrangements!!
You did good for your first NC-17….it was hot, but great if the post was longer, I would have like to read about Tina pleasing Bette for the first time…..post soon please, this is a very sweet and romantic story.
*swallowing*
Where did I put that other fan??!!??