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Unusual Meeting – Chapter 14
Bette lifted Tina’s back off the bed with one hand and skillfully unhooked her bra with the other hand. She pulled the garment free, releasing Tina’s breasts from confinement. Bette backed off momentarily and gazed at the beauty before her. Her flawless complexion continued to her breasts. She licked her lips and watched Tina’s nipples harden almost instantly. And she’s all mine was the thought that went through her head as she moved to kiss her once again.
These kisses were slow, passionate, but loving. Bette was careful to keep her actions under control, wanting their first time to be perfect, not rushed or out of control. Her hands moved to Tina’s breasts and started to squeeze them gently. Her fingers moved to her nipples and she rubbed them between her thumbs and index fingers. She moved her mouth from Tina’s, trailing a line of kisses from her chin to her left breast. There she replaced her fingers with her mouth. With her tongue, she circled the nipple several times before taking it into her mouth. She sucked on it a minute before lightly taking it between her teeth and biting down. Then she moved to do the same to her right breast as her fingers replaced her mouth on the other one.
Bette’s hands worked their way down to the waistband on Tina’s slacks. She unbuttoned them and slid the zipper down. Bette started to push them down and Tina lifted off the bed enough for them to be removed. Again Bette stopped her actions to fully appreciate the gorgeous woman that was Tina Kennard.
This time when Bette returned to Tina’s lips, Tina spoke before she could kiss her. “Um… baby?” Tina could barely get the words out.
“Yes T?” Bette answered her breathing hard.
“Don’t you think you’re a little overdressed?”
Bette glanced down and realized that she was still fully dressed. She started to unbutton her shirt, but her hands were cast aside by Tina’s. “Here, let me.”
Tina unbuttoned the shirt and threw it to the floor behind Bette. She then reached behind her and unfastened the bra she was wearing. Tina’s hands moved to unbutton Bette’s jeans, then Bette slid off the bed and removed them. She climbed back on top of Tina and now the only thing separating them was two thin layers of material. Bette lowered herself so their lips would meet again. Their mouths opened and their tongues immediately sought out the other one. The kissing continued as Bette let her body come into full contact with Tina’s. They both moaned into each other’s mouth as their bodies lined up, breast met breast and so on.
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(52 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
You did a very good job if this was your firs NC-17 i can’t imagine the others one! write is not a easy thing but write in the way you did not everybody can do it! congrats and keep going!
Yes that was great
Yep, this was HOT for your first time! I agree with Lamentamini, some NC-17s can make you doze off, but this was a great effort. Can’t wait for the morning after!!
Love this fic…. Bette in uniform HOT! I wonder how Tina will be able to go back home after this. Post real soon.
Damn thats hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more of them, and funny about the dog. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow, that was very good. You did well. I can’t write so when someone puts themselves out there I respect them for trying. This was great.
after this night they both definately need some time off…great chapter
This was good…hard to believe it was your 1st time writing one. Glad they finally did the nasty…I’m sorry I mean make love. Can’t wait for your next post.
you did GREAT your first time i heard there not easy to do……… i was soooooooo hoping you would have time to post tonite or sunday.please keep it cuming lady.YOUR WIFE IS A VERY LUCKY WOMEN!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT
Yup. Lament is correct. Some NC-17s are so boring that either I kind of doze or just skip and go back to the main page. That didn’t happen w/yours. :-)
sweetttttttt
Too funny, dogs are howling at B&T’s fireworks!
good job for your first time. thanks.
I’m glad they (and you) waited until the time was right. It was great. The earth moved- for all of us! Thanks!
Great job for a first time -17. dogs howling, love it. More please., love your story.
Nice job. It is difficult to write NC-17s. Too much crude detail and they seem cheesy, too little and they seem bleh. It was a very credible effort for your first time. Write some more. They say practice makes perfect or perfect practice makes perfect. LOL. ;-)
(They were both too wrapped up in themselves to notice the neighbors’ dogs howling in response to Tina’s screams.) OMFG that sounds like my landlord’s dogs. I hear them howling out of nowhere and I know siren is going off not too far from me. azmama is correct in that perfect practice makes perfect. No one gets better by practicing mistakes. I think it was pretty good for your first NC-17. I didn’t doze off which is good (yes, have felt myself doze off while reading an NC-17).
The slow burn was totally worth it. I can’t wait to see how they work out the living arrangements!!
You did good for your first NC-17….it was hot, but great if the post was longer, I would have like to read about Tina pleasing Bette for the first time…..post soon please, this is a very sweet and romantic story.
*swallowing*
Where did I put that other fan??!!??