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Unusual Meeting – Chapter 14
“Not that easy Porter.”
“What is the surprise sweetheart?”
“Uh-uh.”
“T …” she began as she moved her lips to Tina’s neck and began leaving a trail of kisses from her collarbone up to her ear, “please tell me what your surprise is.”
“I took Monday off, so I don’t have to leave until Tuesday morning.”
Bette’s face registered the surprise, then broke into one of her smiles that melted Tina’s heart every time. “Oh babe, that’s terrific news.” She began kissing her neck again. “Is that all you need to tell me?”
“Yes dear. Damn, you better not be using this confession technique on anybody else besides me” Tina informed her.
“Only you, babe, only you.”
Bette … She took an extra day off. Can I assume that she thinks this is THE night? I was going to wait because I don’t want either one of us to have to get up and leave after our first night of lovemaking. I wonder if she thought of that too? I think I can take that as a sign.
Tina … She looked surprised and happy about my extra day here. I hope she figures out exactly why I did that. I want us to make love for the first, second, third or more times and not have to be rushed for time. I want her to know that I’m ready to take things to the next level.
They took the motorcycle out for Tina’s ride as promised. They had ridden out on some of the country roads for quite some time. Neither seemed to want to end the feelings they got from Tina wrapped around Bette as they rode.
A few hours later, they returned home tired, hot and sweaty. They both showered and dressed nicely for Tina’s requested picture. They tried various poses; standing and sitting together until Tina had a few that she liked.
Bette went to her computer and printed them out, so they each had copies to look at. “We look good together” Bette told her, looking over Tina’s shoulder as she looked at the pictures.
“We do” Tina readily agreed.
Bette removed the pictures from Tina’s hands and placed them on the coffee table. “We are good together” Bette told her. She reached and pulled Tina into her lap. They started to kiss; something that started gentle erupting into an almost uncontrollable event.
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(52 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
You did a very good job if this was your firs NC-17 i can’t imagine the others one! write is not a easy thing but write in the way you did not everybody can do it! congrats and keep going!
Yes that was great
Yep, this was HOT for your first time! I agree with Lamentamini, some NC-17s can make you doze off, but this was a great effort. Can’t wait for the morning after!!
Love this fic…. Bette in uniform HOT! I wonder how Tina will be able to go back home after this. Post real soon.
Damn thats hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more of them, and funny about the dog. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow, that was very good. You did well. I can’t write so when someone puts themselves out there I respect them for trying. This was great.
after this night they both definately need some time off…great chapter
This was good…hard to believe it was your 1st time writing one. Glad they finally did the nasty…I’m sorry I mean make love. Can’t wait for your next post.
you did GREAT your first time i heard there not easy to do……… i was soooooooo hoping you would have time to post tonite or sunday.please keep it cuming lady.YOUR WIFE IS A VERY LUCKY WOMEN!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT
Yup. Lament is correct. Some NC-17s are so boring that either I kind of doze or just skip and go back to the main page. That didn’t happen w/yours. :-)
sweetttttttt
Too funny, dogs are howling at B&T’s fireworks!
good job for your first time. thanks.
I’m glad they (and you) waited until the time was right. It was great. The earth moved- for all of us! Thanks!
Great job for a first time -17. dogs howling, love it. More please., love your story.
Nice job. It is difficult to write NC-17s. Too much crude detail and they seem cheesy, too little and they seem bleh. It was a very credible effort for your first time. Write some more. They say practice makes perfect or perfect practice makes perfect. LOL. ;-)
(They were both too wrapped up in themselves to notice the neighbors’ dogs howling in response to Tina’s screams.) OMFG that sounds like my landlord’s dogs. I hear them howling out of nowhere and I know siren is going off not too far from me. azmama is correct in that perfect practice makes perfect. No one gets better by practicing mistakes. I think it was pretty good for your first NC-17. I didn’t doze off which is good (yes, have felt myself doze off while reading an NC-17).
The slow burn was totally worth it. I can’t wait to see how they work out the living arrangements!!
You did good for your first NC-17….it was hot, but great if the post was longer, I would have like to read about Tina pleasing Bette for the first time…..post soon please, this is a very sweet and romantic story.
*swallowing*
Where did I put that other fan??!!??