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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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Thanks Carmen, but Latino doesnt count, your mom should have killed you and Shane, a Jewish mom and Dad will condemn me to *****.
Hmm good point, Carmen took her drink and drained the rest. The Schecters where here and showed all their love for Jenny and Chris, never knew them and that made it all so welcoming to him, his grandpa was as happy to see him as he was him.
His grandma pulled at his cheeks and kissed them both, Talk about your Barmitsfa, Carmen pushed Sly into the living room to greet them.
Bette had showed up at the back door with the rest of the food, Shane gratefully headed her way, Thanks youre not going to stay. Shanes lip trembled playfully.
No, I wish, but me and Tina are, Discussing things. Shane immediately caught on and mumbled, Alright, jeez you guys ***** everyday, see ya.
Bette shook her head, and walked back to her home; as she walked into the house she seen two pillows and a quilt on the sofa.
*****.
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Kit arrived to and greeted Cren and Mari. Sly was still in the back as Shane was, Cren was trying to figure out what Sly really was.
Jenny introduced everyone at one time, but saved Sly for last. Cren stepped forward as Sly stepped back, Ah, Slyfinally nice to meet you. He reached out and shook her hand, by now Mari was sizing her up. Jenny scorned her mom with her eyes, Mari shrugged and greeted Sly as well, Kit, Shane and Carmen where both drinking now.
Place your bets ladies. Kit pulled out 10 dollars as Shane did and placed them into Carmens hands.
——10 minutes later
Sly rested her head on her hand and listened in on the tales that Cren was telling them all, most of them where true. Jews back then where big on family and looked after one another.
Kit was still checking around the kitchen with Carmen, witch gave Shane and her the opportunity to learn about his heritage.
Mari gave them heads up for a long night, Sly didnt mind; Jenny gracefully slid her hand under the table and into Slys.
Mari nudged him, Cren youre going way back, you dont even remember, fusha anka muada. The old coupled got back into their arguing state, youre the one who couldnt remember potty training,
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!