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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
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“T?”
Tina shook herself out of her daze and rewound her memory, contemplating what Bette had just said. Moving stuff, right.
“Oh, yes, OK baby. Although there isn’t much to be honest. Just my clothes and my laptop. Couple of books maybe. Oh and some potted plants. Just a few CDs and the CD player, oh and my DVDs and the iPod. There are a load of baby things in the cupboard too. And then there’s just my bathroom stuff and make up and the hairdryer. Oh, and I got these really nice aromatherapy candles I’ve been using that I’d like.”
She was interrupted by Bette’s laughter.
“Yeah I can see there’s not much there T. ” She grinned happily at her wife. Wow, it felt good to think of her like that again, although Bette’s brain went off on a bit of a tangent at this point. Did they need another commitment ceremony to re-affirm their relationship? She had kept her rings safe in the drawer by her bed, taking them out to look at over the last few months. She wondered what Tina had done with hers. She would have to talk to her about that later.
“Well, I guess we can go and sort out what I want in the short term later, and get the rest of my things when we’ve got time,” Tina said pensively.
The apartment had been fine, but despite her natural home-maker skills, it had always felt kind of temporary. She liked having a house and a garden, and a decent sized kitchen to potter around in.
Besides, nearly all of the things she loved about her and Bette’s home were there waiting for her. The apartment had never really been a home, just a place to live.
As Bette turned the car into the underground parking lot, Tina realized she felt no regrets at all at saying goodbye to the apartment. She was looking forward to getting back to the home that had been hers for so long, and to the woman who had been hers for even longer.
As they walked slowly through the parking lot holding hands, Tina felt a strange prickling sensation on the back of her neck. Glancing around uneasily, she saw a sleek silver Jaguar convertible entering. That was Helena’s car, she was pretty sure. God, did she never give up? Tina had thought they had said all they needed to say last night at the opening. She remembered Helena’s speechlessness as she walked away from her. Apparently Helena wasn’t about to let Tina have the last word.
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.