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War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10- THE LAST BATTLE
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Glory: “okay…, we could make a deal…, I know something that you don’t”
Louise and the girls keep silence.
Glory: “fine…, I’ll tell you…, he has an object to send one of you to the end of the universes and dimensions…”
Louise: “Buckley failed and was sucked by that object”
Glory: “wow…, you have a tongue; I doubted that you could speak”
Louise: “we’re listening to you”
Glory: “well…, you are still in danger there is another one, I got two from that distant planet…”
Louise: “where is it?”
Glory: “the first have it”
Louise: “then, you have nothing to trade with us”
Glory: “wait…, I know how to stop the First Evil forever…, he can’t be killed but he could be confined, I tell you how and you give me her realm”
Now Louise has heard what she wants, all the girls looked at her; Louise has the aces on her hand.
Louise and the girls were quiet again. Those silences were emotionally drying Glory, she felt like a wild animal caged.
Glory: “okay…, I was just kidding…, I’ll tell you what…; I will show you how to stop the First Evil forever and you’ll give me back my powers”
The girls and Louise remained quiet. Glory didn’t know what to do. It was Tina who suggested Louise playing with Glory’s mind, to use telepathy to induce in Glory some ideas; and Louise did it.
Louise: (sending a telepathic message to Glory) ‘how your powers could be restored?’
Glory: “you know how to restore my powers, right…? Well if you don’t, you just need to stop the First and take my powers from him”
Louise: (sending a telepathic message to Glory) ‘how could the powers transfer from him to you?’
Glory: “look you just need to defeat him and his mind automatically will release my powers”
Louise: “you aren’t realistic…, you will never come back here or another universe different than yours to exert your powers”
Glory was thinking…, she has no choice, she will stay without powers forever even if the First is defeated, and she will possibly become a pitiful mortal or she will regain her powers and go back to her realm with the other deities she already split with; there was no much to choose from.
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Hi proteonomics,
I felt honored that you thanked me for my loyal support, thank you for that ????
You left some open end, does that mean there will be a sequel?
About the story, i loved it, i mentioned many times that i don’t understand all that you wrote about, wormholes, dimensions, alternative univers, etc, but you did a amazing job to try to explain and the story held my attention till the end!
I have to thank you for sharing this story with us and i hope you will continue to write!
Thank you ????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks so much for being a very loyal reader and commenter, and a friend. ????
About this story, as I said, I also learned many things, as most of the authors here, I also have to do some research, especially on Buffy’s fandom, and about sorcery and astral matters; the sci-fi part wasn’t hard, because is part of my background (I’m sorry if sometimes I was a little nerdish).????
Well, indeed all these stories, the prequel of this, this one I designed as a trilogy; it must be a continuation, but as you read in older Tina’s statement the next adventure will happen in seven years, so…, (lol). ????
I will continue with my other story, which I stopped to finish this and maybe after another one more, and then I will reconsider the continuation that I already called in my drafts “looking for you through the wormhole” But that has to wait, Tina and Bette have to grow up.????
Well, I’ll prepare the next chapter of the other story.
Thanks again for reading this.
P
That is fantastic news that you will continue with the other story ????but please don’t wait seven years!!! Any story you will write i will read and comment on it.
And yes you are a little nerdish ???? but i don’t care. You write about what you know and love and it gives a person without knowledge about it, like me, the chance to learn about it just by reading your story. So thank you for making me a little nerdish too ????
I love and appreciate authors who put energy in their story and do research to get the facts right.
Thank you my friend ????
Thanks for the final chapter! I love happy Tibette end!
Zhenya:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes, I like it when lesbian stories also end happily, especially the stories of TIBETTE.
Even when there are drama and broken hearts, I personally believe that lesbian authors should write happy endings in these stories, because it keeps the spirits of our community high.
Thanks again
P
Wow! I don’t know how I missed this fic I have ben a fan fic fan since the beginning of this site. I loved every minute of this wonderful story. I don’t know if you are still writing fiction for the site or not but I would love to read more from you. I am going to look for Looking for you through the wormhole and hope you wrote and finished it. I love finding stories from our many pro B&T authors that keep them in love strong and happy. Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Thank you, for your comment.
I love sci-fi, I will write looking for you through the wormhole, not immediately because I have other stories in the way and a couple to finish.
Thanks, Take care