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War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10- THE LAST BATTLE
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Glory: “fine…, I will go back to my original realm…, but I will regain all my powers…”
Louise: “if you tell us how to stop the First, you will go back to your real world and perhaps there, you will recover your powers”
Glory: (sighing) “okay…, we have a deal…, the only thing you could do to defeat and stop the First Evil from coming back again in few years is to send him to his origins…; there is a planet very far from Helldom, from where the First came from after betraying all his equals; those are not totally dead, they are in latent life. I heard they are similar to the First they are the same race, but they are spirits, very powerful, they could get a solid form, they could adopt a corporeal shape too. If the First is sent there, all her power will be absorbed by those entities, his power would be equally distributed. I heard the other entities, though ambitious, are not as treacherous as the First, they can’t stop the malignity from him, but he will be restrained and couldn’t menace to invade other universes. If you do that, the First will release my powers and I will be allowed to go to my realm too”
Louise: “how could you expect us to transport the First from Helldom to his original planet?”
Glory: “oh… that I don’t know, but you are powerful… I’m sure you would know what to do”
In effect, Louise and the girls knew what to do, but Louise wanted to confuse Glory, just in case she planned to betray them at the end.
Louise: “fine, in the meantime, you will remain in the cage, food, and water will be provided to you by an automatic system of robot-cooks, if you want to talk to us there is a button in the right corner of your cell, just push it and you will be contacted by us”
Glory: “okay, I want my food, I’m hungry…”
Louise: “oh… and something else…, you have a poisoned dart…, we need it…, leave it in the floor outside the cage and go to the back of your cell, so we could pick it up”
After taking the poisonous dart that was intended for Tina, the girls and Louise left and sealed the room.
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Hi proteonomics,
I felt honored that you thanked me for my loyal support, thank you for that ????
You left some open end, does that mean there will be a sequel?
About the story, i loved it, i mentioned many times that i don’t understand all that you wrote about, wormholes, dimensions, alternative univers, etc, but you did a amazing job to try to explain and the story held my attention till the end!
I have to thank you for sharing this story with us and i hope you will continue to write!
Thank you ????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks so much for being a very loyal reader and commenter, and a friend. ????
About this story, as I said, I also learned many things, as most of the authors here, I also have to do some research, especially on Buffy’s fandom, and about sorcery and astral matters; the sci-fi part wasn’t hard, because is part of my background (I’m sorry if sometimes I was a little nerdish).????
Well, indeed all these stories, the prequel of this, this one I designed as a trilogy; it must be a continuation, but as you read in older Tina’s statement the next adventure will happen in seven years, so…, (lol). ????
I will continue with my other story, which I stopped to finish this and maybe after another one more, and then I will reconsider the continuation that I already called in my drafts “looking for you through the wormhole” But that has to wait, Tina and Bette have to grow up.????
Well, I’ll prepare the next chapter of the other story.
Thanks again for reading this.
P
That is fantastic news that you will continue with the other story ????but please don’t wait seven years!!! Any story you will write i will read and comment on it.
And yes you are a little nerdish ???? but i don’t care. You write about what you know and love and it gives a person without knowledge about it, like me, the chance to learn about it just by reading your story. So thank you for making me a little nerdish too ????
I love and appreciate authors who put energy in their story and do research to get the facts right.
Thank you my friend ????
Thanks for the final chapter! I love happy Tibette end!
Zhenya:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes, I like it when lesbian stories also end happily, especially the stories of TIBETTE.
Even when there are drama and broken hearts, I personally believe that lesbian authors should write happy endings in these stories, because it keeps the spirits of our community high.
Thanks again
P
Wow! I don’t know how I missed this fic I have ben a fan fic fan since the beginning of this site. I loved every minute of this wonderful story. I don’t know if you are still writing fiction for the site or not but I would love to read more from you. I am going to look for Looking for you through the wormhole and hope you wrote and finished it. I love finding stories from our many pro B&T authors that keep them in love strong and happy. Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Thank you, for your comment.
I love sci-fi, I will write looking for you through the wormhole, not immediately because I have other stories in the way and a couple to finish.
Thanks, Take care