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War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10- THE LAST BATTLE
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In the parking of the combat f-cars, Angus was confused, Bette just went away at high speed, and suddenly is now there in front of him hugging Kit, while they both are crying. Tina is pale and hugs them both and Angus starts asking.
Angus: “what… what the hell happened?”
While Angus was waiting for a response, Louise came trying to verify what she saw on the footage sent by the probes, in the monitors. The holovideos showed a wounded woman giving Kit a mysterious box that she took. After running a face-recognition program, Louise could deduct it was Tiana Buckley. Louise pushed an alarm button; the entire complex was in red alert. Then Bette appeared in Kit’s side and both vanished; for a moment Louise panicked and thought the worse. She previously had sent a probe to look for Tina and to her surprise, she saw in the video along with Tina, Bette, and Kit hugging her, and now she is here investigating.
Louise: “that was Buckley…, right?”
Angus: “who…?”
Louise: “the woman who gave Kit that box…”
Kit: “I didn’t know, I never met her”
Tina: “yes, it was that woman, I saw you with the box”
Bette: “Tina told me and I ran to get you”
Angus: “how could you save her?”
Bette: “Tina made a device to create a small wormhole and bring me from wherever I am, to her, and I brought Kit with me”
Angus: “that means if you were to be lost in a wormhole, Tina could take you back?”
Tina: “no, only works if we are in the same space, in the same universe…, but in the worst situation, I could trace where she is, and she could trace where I am”
Louise: “so…, you have a chip in some place or your body”
Tina: “uhhuh…, just in case…”
They were finally relieved, even though it was very scary, now they have one enemy less.
The group walked toward the cabin to eat, and, of course, after the fright comes to the delight. The couples went to their respective bedrooms.
On the way to her bedroom, Bette was still anxious with the memory of the last events, she was walking holding hands with Tina, after few minutes she realized her beloved hasn’t pronounced a word, she turned her face to see her, Tina was pale and her eyes were glassy, her look was absent. Bette felt a great pain in her partner’s heart.
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Hi proteonomics,
I felt honored that you thanked me for my loyal support, thank you for that ????
You left some open end, does that mean there will be a sequel?
About the story, i loved it, i mentioned many times that i don’t understand all that you wrote about, wormholes, dimensions, alternative univers, etc, but you did a amazing job to try to explain and the story held my attention till the end!
I have to thank you for sharing this story with us and i hope you will continue to write!
Thank you ????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks so much for being a very loyal reader and commenter, and a friend. ????
About this story, as I said, I also learned many things, as most of the authors here, I also have to do some research, especially on Buffy’s fandom, and about sorcery and astral matters; the sci-fi part wasn’t hard, because is part of my background (I’m sorry if sometimes I was a little nerdish).????
Well, indeed all these stories, the prequel of this, this one I designed as a trilogy; it must be a continuation, but as you read in older Tina’s statement the next adventure will happen in seven years, so…, (lol). ????
I will continue with my other story, which I stopped to finish this and maybe after another one more, and then I will reconsider the continuation that I already called in my drafts “looking for you through the wormhole” But that has to wait, Tina and Bette have to grow up.????
Well, I’ll prepare the next chapter of the other story.
Thanks again for reading this.
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That is fantastic news that you will continue with the other story ????but please don’t wait seven years!!! Any story you will write i will read and comment on it.
And yes you are a little nerdish ???? but i don’t care. You write about what you know and love and it gives a person without knowledge about it, like me, the chance to learn about it just by reading your story. So thank you for making me a little nerdish too ????
I love and appreciate authors who put energy in their story and do research to get the facts right.
Thank you my friend ????
Thanks for the final chapter! I love happy Tibette end!
Zhenya:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes, I like it when lesbian stories also end happily, especially the stories of TIBETTE.
Even when there are drama and broken hearts, I personally believe that lesbian authors should write happy endings in these stories, because it keeps the spirits of our community high.
Thanks again
P
Wow! I don’t know how I missed this fic I have ben a fan fic fan since the beginning of this site. I loved every minute of this wonderful story. I don’t know if you are still writing fiction for the site or not but I would love to read more from you. I am going to look for Looking for you through the wormhole and hope you wrote and finished it. I love finding stories from our many pro B&T authors that keep them in love strong and happy. Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Thank you, for your comment.
I love sci-fi, I will write looking for you through the wormhole, not immediately because I have other stories in the way and a couple to finish.
Thanks, Take care