Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10- THE LAST BATTLE
Login to add story to favorites
(4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Bette: (squeezing her hand) “Tina…, Tina…., baby…”
Tina’s mind was somewhere else; it was on her old nightmare; now she knew that everything was true.
Nightmare
Everything was blue; she was in a diffused blue tunnel, she walked until an opening in the side, where she saw the outer space crossed by a type of waves cutting the sight in several parts, it was like a mirage, she asked herself ‘what the hell is this?’ and suddenly saw at the corner of her eye at this person, a blonde girl, hazel eyes with strange clothes looking back at her ‘the interdimensional crossing between universes’ the other responded.
Tina looked at the stranger, but the more she looked the less strange the girl was; finally, after a couple of minutes she realized the stranger was her but older; she didn’t understand ‘why are we here? Who are you?’ the stranger told her ‘I brought you here because I want to show you something, and you know very well who I am’
A tremor ran through all her body, she knew the stranger will show her something bad. ‘show me what you have to’; the stranger looked at her with pity ‘this is hard, but you need to be strong…, we have to be strong…, listen, there are two interdimensional-rollercoaster devices in your time, those could take you to places and times that you wouldn’t imagine, from where is very hard to come back and very hard to go and find something or someone’ the stranger looked again in Tina’s eyes and weighed her words ‘but you are the best…, those dimensional-rollercoasters will be close to Bette twice, but the aftermaths will be different, though dangerous both times…; the first time is right now, it’s at the door of the events, any moment that device will be around Bette, and please pay attention, you and only you could save her from that one, and you must do it, there is no other way, otherwise she will never be herself wherever and whenever she would be sent, that is one way trip from where there is no return; at this point we are in a paradox, only mom would take us from this by making the right decision’
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Hi proteonomics,
I felt honored that you thanked me for my loyal support, thank you for that ????
You left some open end, does that mean there will be a sequel?
About the story, i loved it, i mentioned many times that i don’t understand all that you wrote about, wormholes, dimensions, alternative univers, etc, but you did a amazing job to try to explain and the story held my attention till the end!
I have to thank you for sharing this story with us and i hope you will continue to write!
Thank you ????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks so much for being a very loyal reader and commenter, and a friend. ????
About this story, as I said, I also learned many things, as most of the authors here, I also have to do some research, especially on Buffy’s fandom, and about sorcery and astral matters; the sci-fi part wasn’t hard, because is part of my background (I’m sorry if sometimes I was a little nerdish).????
Well, indeed all these stories, the prequel of this, this one I designed as a trilogy; it must be a continuation, but as you read in older Tina’s statement the next adventure will happen in seven years, so…, (lol). ????
I will continue with my other story, which I stopped to finish this and maybe after another one more, and then I will reconsider the continuation that I already called in my drafts “looking for you through the wormhole” But that has to wait, Tina and Bette have to grow up.????
Well, I’ll prepare the next chapter of the other story.
Thanks again for reading this.
P
That is fantastic news that you will continue with the other story ????but please don’t wait seven years!!! Any story you will write i will read and comment on it.
And yes you are a little nerdish ???? but i don’t care. You write about what you know and love and it gives a person without knowledge about it, like me, the chance to learn about it just by reading your story. So thank you for making me a little nerdish too ????
I love and appreciate authors who put energy in their story and do research to get the facts right.
Thank you my friend ????
Thanks for the final chapter! I love happy Tibette end!
Zhenya:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes, I like it when lesbian stories also end happily, especially the stories of TIBETTE.
Even when there are drama and broken hearts, I personally believe that lesbian authors should write happy endings in these stories, because it keeps the spirits of our community high.
Thanks again
P
Wow! I don’t know how I missed this fic I have ben a fan fic fan since the beginning of this site. I loved every minute of this wonderful story. I don’t know if you are still writing fiction for the site or not but I would love to read more from you. I am going to look for Looking for you through the wormhole and hope you wrote and finished it. I love finding stories from our many pro B&T authors that keep them in love strong and happy. Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Thank you, for your comment.
I love sci-fi, I will write looking for you through the wormhole, not immediately because I have other stories in the way and a couple to finish.
Thanks, Take care