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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 3 – FRIENDSHIP

    Story written on May 14, 2017 by proteonomics.
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    Bette: “of course I trust Tina, but I want us to be sure of each other and the thing is that I was afraid if she would stop  loving me the same way she loved me before, after this month of separation; and you could ask her, she has the same fear” Louise: “you guys

    Bette: “of course I trust Tina, but I want us to be sure of each other and the thing is that I was afraid if she would stop  loving me the same way she loved me before, after this month of separation; and you could ask her, she has the same fear”

    Louise: “you guys are young, you are full of insecurities…, okay, I will help you, but you have to talk to Melvin too, I mean both of you”

    The next day both, Bette and Tina went to talk to Melvin, who has been warned by Louise about the intentions of the girls; Melvin was happy, he wanted both girls together; he knew that is what Maxine would want but he knew also the girls should assume responsibility.

    Melvin: “fine I’m happy for you; now going to the practical approach, where are you going to live?”

    Bette: “well…, in our apartment in the annex…, for now”

    Melvin: “I’m talking after you engagement ceremony, you both will be a couple”

    Tina: “but we are already a couple”

    Melvin: “I understand your point, but the law says, once you have your engagement ceremony, you should start getting your family house, you should have a permanent and decent income, you have to pass the responsible parenthood course otherwise your commitment won’t be legally validated”

    Bette: “did you have to go through all of that when you marry mom?”

    Melvin: “yes, but fortunately I had the house and we both had the permanent decent income, and it took some time to pass the course, which is why we married when you were three months in her womb, we had to do the engagement ceremony and it took the time indicated in the law to marry, I guess you wouldn’t have problems with the house, because I know you both have savings and the inheritance from your mothers, and I know that Louise would give you one of her houses, and I myself would do the same, but you still have to deal with the other requirements”

    Bette: “I will need to leave the research group to get a job with a decent income, and Tina, she is still under age to get an independent job, she is protected by the law and she has a mother who legally has to take care of her”

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    1. Hello proteonomics, welcome back, you were finally able to tear yourself away from the other stories ????

      I am very happy you were able to write a new chapter.

      Both Tina and Bette are a little bit fast moving with their engagement, they belong together, but are still very young and seems to handle out of fear to lose each other to someone else.

      Still don’t have a clue sometimes what you are writing about , you try very hard to explain it, but sciencefiction is so not my thing, but i really enjoy your story and will continue to read it with great interest.

      Thanks again for the update!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Thanks for reading, I know it is a little bit hard to bring sci-fi, especially when I’m more into Sci than in fi, but I will try to be more simple in the next chapters; I know, also, that part of this story is coming from ‘Buffy the vampire slayer’ and there were 5-6 years-story, and sometimes I have to summarize some of that; I hope it will get better, in ten days I will post the update. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      P

      • Hi Skunk:

        Thanks do much for reading and commenting, I will post today evening or tomorrow, I just need to finish a couple of pictures. Thanks again.

        P

    4. ‘My friend proteomics.
      I am updating my reading after some time.
      I’m back .
      I loved this chapter.
      I also think it’s too early for Bette and Tina to have
      A more serious commitment, they still have no maturity to assume
      This commitment to marriage. It’s good to make the most of it.
      This moment of dating, which is very good.
      I apologize for not making a detailed comment.
      It’s just that I’m still surviving the storm I’m going through.
      Bear hug
      All universe’

      • Hi my friend:

        I’m glad that you came back, and that you liked the chapter; Bette and Tina are facing the impotence of not being able to do what they want, because they are ignoring their love ones and the civil and social order that they defend and for which they are fighting; they love each other but still need to mature; we will see how they evolve as the fight rise.
        Thank you so much for reading and commenting my friend.

        P

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