Fan Fiction
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WESTERN SKIES
Tina – I didn’t see you!
The brunette looks amused.
Bette – This makes it all better …
Feeling self-conscious, Tina stops and gives the pieces of paper to Bette.
Tina – I was trying to help.
The brunette starts drying herself off with the towels.
Bette – What are you doing here?
Tina – I was getting a glass of water.
Bette – I mean … what are you doing in my house?
Tina – Kit invited me to stay tonight.
She chuckles.
Tina – Actually, she insisted!
Bette – She didn’t tell me.
Tina – Does she have to tell you everything?
Bette – She should! But my sister is hardheaded!
She throws the wet paper towels in the trash can and grabs a few more.
Tina – I guess it runs in the family …
The brunette chuckles.
Bette – What do you know about me or my family?
She continues to dry herself off.
Tina – She told me enough.
Bette – Indulge me!
Tina smirks and leans against the kitchen counter.
Tina – That you have a temper.
Bette – Huh! And …?
Tina – That you’re a painter.
Bette – Well, wasn’t it obvious, after you invaded my privacy?
Tina – I just wanted to take some pictures to recreate them in the set.
Bette – Oh, my privacy will be in your set!
Tina – I haven’t decided yet.
Bette – And I have no say in it?
Tina – It’s not like I’m going to replicate your room. I just wanted ideas that matched the architecture of the house.
Bette – And which “ideas” are you planning to use? She asks, gesturing the quotation marks with her fingers.
Tina – I like your window view. And the setting by the window … you know … your painting tools and material.
Bette – Huh … So, you have a painter in the movie?
She throws the remaining wet paper towels in the trash can.
Tina – We might.
The brunette frowns.
Bette – Are you changing the movie on the fly?
Tina – I’m creating it! I happen to be the script writer as well.
Bette – Ah … the producer and writer! How accomplished! She says, in a passive aggressive tone.
The blonde looks annoyed.
Tina – Thank you.
Bette – And how quaint to have a painter in my honor! Will the painter be the heroine?
She leans against the kitchen island.
Tina – As a matter of fact … yes!
Bette – Interesting! I can show her some of my paintings …
The producer smirks.
Tina – I don’t think they apply.
Bette raises an eyebrow.
Bette – Why not?
Tina – The character is a seventeen-year-old girl. I think your painting style is … a little beyond her years.
Bette – And how would you know?
Tina sends her a knowing look. The painter crosses her arms.
Bette – You also looked at my painting?!
The blonde presses her lips together.
Tina – Sorry … I thought it would be a painting of the view. I didn’t know that it would be so …
Bette – Lesbian?
Tina – Irreverent!
Bette – Why? Are you a prim and proper Southerner?
Tina – I don’t recall telling you that I’m a Southerner.
Bette – You can take the Southerner out of the South but her accent doesn’t entirely go away.
The brunette smiles charmingly.
Bette – Quite adorable, particularly when you are flustered.
Tina – Frustrated is more like it! And I live in LA, if you don’t know. I’m used to irreverence.
She stands up straight, ready to end the interaction. Bette looks her up and down.
Bette – The LA women I know don’t usually sleep in … pretty pink lingerie.
Tina instinctively closes her coat and folds her arms.
Tina – I saw your painting! I don’t think women wear anything around you!
The brunette laughs.
Bette – Is this a compliment or … prim and proper indignation?
Tina – Please … I’m an artist too! To each, their own!
She grabs her glass.
Bette – I could certainly make an exception for you and paint you in your nightie, if you want.
Tina – Not likely!
Kit appears at the kitchen door and turns on the light.
Kit – What is happening here?
The two women turn to her startled. Kit looks at Bette’s wet tank top.
(TBC)
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Bibi28 says
I promise to read every chapter as soon as possible, as long you keep posting them regurlarly ????
I love it, they are two proud woman as i see, but i already see the attraction.
Kit is a very nice woman and certainly not afraid to head butt with Bette.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
proteonomics says
dbff:
Great chapter, thanks for the rapid update. I like your story very much.
P
Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for the update!
I promise read and comment regularly too)
I like how you developing your story, so waiting for the next.
Sorry, but can’t help about editing old posts – maybe you need to write messege to Jacky (https://lesfan.com/members/jacky/)
leonora says
I love the storyline and your writing style is great! I can’t wait for the next chapters!
Alexx says
Thank you for the creat chapter!
Bette in wet t-shirt – nice)
Waiting for the next chapters.
SassyGran says
I promise you that if you keep posting regularly I will read them as soon as I am able.
Love the 3 Characters you have given us here and look forward to your story unfolding.
Thanks for posting please post again soon.
SG
BlueFlame7 says
Great descriptive writing. Im hooked! PPS
MissOne says
Great chapter!
Good to see that Tina and Bette start talking, but don’t know how i feel about T saw Bette’s picture without her permission
Interesting plot, waiting for the next update!
Therese_Belivet says
Dear dbff
I’m currently discovering this other story, being “orphan” from your After The Kiss *wink* and I’m already hooked !
You have a truly cinematic eye – and I’m a huge cinema passionate. I can see Kit’s ranch and every details as if I was admiring them through Tina’s eyes and, well, to imagine Bette as a cowgirl is very sexy, I must say !
Since I adore western movies, I cannot help but remembering the great Missy, my favorite classic actress : pretty fiery, even arrogant but mesmerizing too – our poor Tina has no chance to resist !
Thank you so very much for this new delightful journey, my dear writer :-)
A.
dbff says
I’m so glad you found this story, A.! It’s for Tibetters like you!
ps: I had to check, but I believe you were referring to Barbara Stanwyck! :D
Therese_Belivet says
Yes indeed !
Well, what can I say ? “Cowgirl” immediately makes me think about Stanwyck in one of her westerns (like The Furies, The Moonlighter or Forty Guns) – even if this marvelously versatile actress was great in every other movie genres possible *wink*
And, well, her voice is the sexiest I have ever heared… Not a beauty but what a charm – more dangerous, the charm !
So now that you already know two of my absolute favorite ladies, Jennifer Beals and “Missy”, I five your the last two : my first teenage crush, Vivien Leigh, and my biggest screen crush ever, Kate Winslet :-)
And you, if I can ask ? *big wink*
A,