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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Helena: I’ll go next so when I was 14, I told mum the dog ran away truth is he actually died he was hit by a car while I was walking him.
Alice: OMG! Helena!
Helena: Yeah, I know I’m going straight to PETA hell!
Kit: Uh, just a little advice I wouldn’t tell anyone else that story!
Helena: It was an accident!
Dana: You know what wasn’t an accident the day I dropped my moms freshly made lamb stew all over the kitchen floor I scooped it up then put it back in pot. I sat at the table while she served everyone and when she got to me I made up some excuse that my stomach hurt. I showed her that was the last time she made me wear pig tails in high school! [everyone surprised at her hidden savagery stood up and applauded even Alice]
While everyone found themselves enjoying Jennys game, Jenny herself was growing suspicious Tina had been gone a little to long for her liking. As the cheers and whistles continued she quietly snuck away into the house.
Shane: This calls for a celebration who wants a drink!?
Helena: I do!
Kit: Let me grab a cup!
Alice: Guys, Jenny is holding the alcohol hostage remember?
Dana: Nope, not anymore! [she says smiling holding up the bag]
Helena: [looking around] Hey, where did Jenny go?
Kit: Hopefully she and these summer bugs have returned to hell where they belong.
Dana: Who cares lets get——–. [before she could complete her sentence a loud scream echoed through the air followed by the roughly opening of the patio door.]
Shane: What the hell!?
Running full speed from inside the house Jenny emerges heading directly behind a tree hoping its large size would hide her from whatever it was she was trying to hide from.
Jenny: [covering her eyes] My eyes! My poor sensitive eyes!!!!!!!!!!
Dana: What’s going on?
Alice: Uh, I think were about to find out! [seeing Bette rush from out the house soon after]
Bette: I’M GOING TO KILL YOU!
Kit: Bette!?
Tina: NO, ONLY AFTER I KILL HER FIRST!
Shane: Tina!?
Helena: Jenny, what did you do now!? [pausing for a moment she stares at Bette and Tina]
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.