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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Shane: [looked at her awkwardly]
Dana: [mouthed the words sorry]
Shane: [sighing in defeat] Uh, okay fine when I was in the 10th grade my best friend was actually my girlfriend she used to spend the night all the time.
Jenny: [squealed in excitement] Okay, Helena your next?
Helena: I hate you.
Jenny: Which translates to I used to lick 9 volt batteries Kit?
Helena: [flipped her off]
Kit: On a dare I called 911 and hung up real fast 5 minutes later the police, fire department, and ambulance showed up I lied and said it was Bette.
Dana: [slightly laughing] Poor Bette.
Jenny: Alice?
Alice: Uh, no I’m going to pass.
Dana: [her response forced Dana to stare at her]
Kit: Hey, I gave an answer no one is exempt now spill it!
Alice: [sighing] Fine, okay uh the flood we actually had was because of an indoor slip in slide competition.
Jenny: Lame okay, Dane your up?
Dana: An indoor slip in slide I think that’s pretty cool.
Alice: [smiles slightly]
Shane: [smirks at their exchange]
Jenny: Answer the question.
Dana: I don’t have anything exciting to confess.
Jenny: Oh, come off it Billie Jean King let it rip!
Dana: Fine, when my parents used to make me mad which was 99.9% of the time I used to put droplets of water on their cell and the house phone until they broke.
Kit: Dana, why you little devil you!?
Shane: Didn’t think you had it in you I’m impressed.
Jenny: I’m not okay, its my turn again I used to play with myself and moan really loud because you know I was that in tune with my body it was beautiful and still, is my parents would yell upstairs at me to turn my tv down……..sorry mom & dad it wasn’t the tv!
Shane: [shakes her head smiling]
Helena: [even she had to smile at her response]
Jenny: Yeah, pretty cool right? [she says turning to Kit to give her a high-five]
Kit: [shy’s away from her] Uh, no I’m good I know where your hands been!
Jenny: [lowers her hand then wipes it on her shirt] The unspoken tension between Alice and Dana was too thick to ignore while they continued to play the game all eyes were on both of them.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.