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What will she do next? 11
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“Hey Mama! There she is, my beautiful little girl,” Kit almost always ignored Bette or Tina whenever Angelica was around and today was no exception.
“Let me have her,” Kit began with outstretched arms.
“No Kit, you shouldn’t lift yet remember? I’ll take her to your office if you likeshe’s so pleased to see you,” Tina replied.
“Yeah, since Bette’s been away this week I haven’t seen much of my niece,” Kit looked at Tina with a slight frown.
“I was going to bring her round tomorrow afternoon, we can still do that of its okay with you?” Tina asked this as she, Kit and Angelica all walked towards the back office.
It was at this moment that Bette walked in and moved to the counter to ask if the staff had seen Tina. Lara explained that Tina had a table in the back and offered Bette a plate of fresh mixed fruit.
Bette sat and nervously looked around. As it was early there where only a few of the usual suspects. She continued anxiously scanning the room when a sight caught her eye and made her heart skip a beat.
Tina emerged from around the counter where she was currently engaged in some light hearted banter with Lara and another member of staff. She hadn’t seen Bette yet, but she could tell that she had just been told that Bette was around because suddenly her entire body language changed.
It seemed to Bette that Tina appeared to transform before her eyes, as an air of confidence seemed to suddenly fill Tina’s lungs and Tina glowed with the knowledge that her lover, life partner, her soul mate was somewhere in the room watching her.
Tina began her walk over to their table, and knowing that Bette was most likely looking at her, took her time and gently swung her hips that were hidden in the loose fitting long skirt just a tiny bit more than usual.
Bette watched open mouthed.
After all, it had been about one month, thirty days, seven hundred and twenty hours since she had last seen Tina, had had her Tina fix, and Bette felt herself craving her, badly.
When Tina was able to get Bette in her line of sight, she held Bette’s gaze for as long as it took for her to reach the table and Bette felt herself shiver.
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This was a great post. Happy to see that you have Kit on the mend and most importantly you have Bette & Tina talking. They must continue to talk and stop running from each other when a problem arises. Please get them back in the house together and let them continue to come together. Thanks. Post soon please.
Running into the Ocean NAKED…HOT MAMA..GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS..THANKS
^5 Ayesha, I agree…..Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
Tina knows that Bette loves her and the baby. Tina sorta f%^%ked up. Maybe she is on solid ground again. Some women,after a birth of a child get messed up . Maybe Tina did. lets hope she did. thanks
anyone else think tina just wants some ass and bette might be trying to work on the problems??
maybe tina needs to go swimming and get a quick beat down by a seal. lmao
I just found out I have miss a few updates…bad me… bad bad me..How can I miss those I love your story so much. I really love the way you write. I have read a lot of fanfic and I have to say this story clearly is one of my top ten stories…. make that top five.
There is so many emotions and feelings like in CH 7 The pain Bette was feeling at that moment in the hospital knowing T was with HIM… that was so down. And later I could feel the love she still had for her family as she was showing T how much she cared and longed for her and to be with her. It was just slipping away with every effort she made to show. Just slipping away like she felt T slip through her fingers.
I’m glad they are now talking again and slowly, real slowly coming back together. I wonder if T will tel Bette soon what really happened that night. I know Bette won’t like to hear it but I know if she really listens she will know there is so much hope for both of them.
Well I can make this reply really long like 5 pages or so… but that means you will have less time to write so what I really wanted to say is I loved the update and I can’t wait for more … thank you.
Beautifully written. It’s so clearly evident they love and need each other. I’m glad Tina finally recognized who she needs. Please post soon. I can’t get enough of this story. :p
Good chapter. Glad they talk and Tina know who she need in her life now and let see what’s next, thanks!
Awesome. I’m glad Tina came back to reality. Keep it coming.
Arent those California Oceans riddled with sharks??? Great Whites:-) Just kidding. Anyways what a treat didnt expect any posts from you today. So I am pleasantly surprised, as always enjoyed it immensely. I’ll leave the re-reading until later…
I am liking these 2 when they talk. they still have more to sort through, but hopefully they will be honest. It seems like Tina likes to use sex to distract Bette when they should be discussing their relationship.
the name you picked as your moniker is not lost on me, I know you must favor Lu, but it would be nice to see Tina work harder for Bette’s affection. Most of these stories all have Bette turning to mush when she see Tina. Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
I can’t wait to see how they work this out. your dialogue rings true. keep up the work, and I will continue to read.
It really is so hard for these two to communicate isn’t it? Sounds to me like they have a difficult road ahead of them. I’m ready to see where you are doing to take us Crush and thanks for giving us a moment of happiness.
amazing..finnaly the Tina we love came back to her sense..cant wait for them really reconnect if you know what i mean..lol..and i hope Kit stay healthy…another amazing chapter post real soon