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What will she do next? 11
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She gasped, ‘What she does to memy Godshe is so beautiful.’
Tina walked right up to Bette and placed her finger lightly on Bette’s chin.
“May I kiss you?” she barely whispered. Bette, too stunned and emotionally involved to speak just blinked.
Tina used her index finger to lift Bette’s head slightly and then leaned down and placed her lips on her lover’s and began what was supposed to be a gentle and friendly, semi formal kiss. Inevitably, it didn’t end up like that.
Soon Tina found herself exploring Bette’s mouth with a vigour that should have been carried out in a bedroom rather than in a public caf.
Granted the caf belonged to Bette’s sister, but that wasn’t the point. The few people that were there had begun staring, and even though Tina’s hands gently rested on Bette’s shoulders with the fingers of her right hand occasionally brushing Bette’s neck sending tingles to all of the right places, the kissing alone was certainly rated R.
Had Alice and Shane not sauntered inwell, let’s just say that an audible sigh of relief and maybe frustration could be heard by the on looking patrons when they stopped.
Alice was the first to speak, rudely snapping Tina out of the most pleasurable moment that she had received in the last three months.
“Get a room!” she exclaimed as they approached. Tina broke her kiss and maintaining eye contact with Bette spoke.
“Hey Alice,” and when she eventually turned around, she sat very close to Bette and then she noticed Shane. “Hey stranger! Where have you been hiding?”
“Hey you two,” Shane looked at them quizzically and continued, “Umm, what’s this about?”
The gang knew that Tina and Bette were supposedly on some sort if ‘break’ and hadn’t seen the two of them together in over a month.
“We needed to have a talk about a few things,” Tina spoke for them both as she could feel that Bette had not recovered from her lips.
“Didn’t look like you two were talking much,” Alice spoke sarcastically and it sounded a little like bitterness to Shane.
“We only just got here Alice,” Tina defended.
“Hey well I’m happy for youboth of you, I’m not staying anyway, I gotta go meet Carmen, I promised I’d bring her breakfast.”
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This was a great post. Happy to see that you have Kit on the mend and most importantly you have Bette & Tina talking. They must continue to talk and stop running from each other when a problem arises. Please get them back in the house together and let them continue to come together. Thanks. Post soon please.
Running into the Ocean NAKED…HOT MAMA..GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS..THANKS
^5 Ayesha, I agree…..Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
Tina knows that Bette loves her and the baby. Tina sorta f%^%ked up. Maybe she is on solid ground again. Some women,after a birth of a child get messed up . Maybe Tina did. lets hope she did. thanks
anyone else think tina just wants some ass and bette might be trying to work on the problems??
maybe tina needs to go swimming and get a quick beat down by a seal. lmao
I just found out I have miss a few updates…bad me… bad bad me..How can I miss those I love your story so much. I really love the way you write. I have read a lot of fanfic and I have to say this story clearly is one of my top ten stories…. make that top five.
There is so many emotions and feelings like in CH 7 The pain Bette was feeling at that moment in the hospital knowing T was with HIM… that was so down. And later I could feel the love she still had for her family as she was showing T how much she cared and longed for her and to be with her. It was just slipping away with every effort she made to show. Just slipping away like she felt T slip through her fingers.
I’m glad they are now talking again and slowly, real slowly coming back together. I wonder if T will tel Bette soon what really happened that night. I know Bette won’t like to hear it but I know if she really listens she will know there is so much hope for both of them.
Well I can make this reply really long like 5 pages or so… but that means you will have less time to write so what I really wanted to say is I loved the update and I can’t wait for more … thank you.
Beautifully written. It’s so clearly evident they love and need each other. I’m glad Tina finally recognized who she needs. Please post soon. I can’t get enough of this story. :p
Good chapter. Glad they talk and Tina know who she need in her life now and let see what’s next, thanks!
Awesome. I’m glad Tina came back to reality. Keep it coming.
Arent those California Oceans riddled with sharks??? Great Whites:-) Just kidding. Anyways what a treat didnt expect any posts from you today. So I am pleasantly surprised, as always enjoyed it immensely. I’ll leave the re-reading until later…
I am liking these 2 when they talk. they still have more to sort through, but hopefully they will be honest. It seems like Tina likes to use sex to distract Bette when they should be discussing their relationship.
the name you picked as your moniker is not lost on me, I know you must favor Lu, but it would be nice to see Tina work harder for Bette’s affection. Most of these stories all have Bette turning to mush when she see Tina. Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
I can’t wait to see how they work this out. your dialogue rings true. keep up the work, and I will continue to read.
It really is so hard for these two to communicate isn’t it? Sounds to me like they have a difficult road ahead of them. I’m ready to see where you are doing to take us Crush and thanks for giving us a moment of happiness.
amazing..finnaly the Tina we love came back to her sense..cant wait for them really reconnect if you know what i mean..lol..and i hope Kit stay healthy…another amazing chapter post real soon