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What will she do next-Finale part two (b)
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Finally, all good things really do come to an end but hopefully
Bette awoke in some seedy, smelly motel somewhere along the Californian coastline. After she had angrily dashed her phone she drove along the coast for over two hours. She was to regret her action of tossing the phone when she realised that she was running out of fuel and had not seen a service station in a while, not that she had been looking for one any way. When the convertible eventually coughed and spluttered to a stop by the side of the road, Bette cursed herself for acting so impetuous in the first place.
‘God Kit really calls it like she sees it when she says you’re like a spoilt child huh?’ Bette chastised herself.
She was thankful that she was wearing casual clothes and shoes when she had to abandon the car in search of help and had ended up walking for nearly an hour until she came to the dingy rest stop.
As Bette obtained a room key from the none too pleased clerk at the check in desk, she briefly wondered what his problem was when she noticed the time. 3AM.
“Well, it’s too late to call Kit, she would be well and truly asleep and as for Tinaah well she can wait until tomorrow too,” Bette had said loudly to the disgusting room.
Without removing any item of clothing she had then collapsed onto the bed and immediately fell asleep.
She awoke to the sound of traffic rushing by the next morning and was a little surprised to see that it was nine thirty. After calling her break down service and arranging for them to retrieve her (or rescue her) from the motel, she took a deep breath and decided to face the music, starting with the hardest one first, Kit.
The ringing was answered almost immediately.
“Damn!” she had exclaimed unexpectedly.
“Bette where the ***** you at?” Do you know how worried people have been over you? I was just about to call the police”
“Kit I’m sorry,” Bette interrupted quietly.
Kit calmed herself before speaking again. “Are you okay? You’re not hurt are you?”
“No, I’m not hurt I’m finewell a little tired and hungry and in desperate need of a hot shower”
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awww..making us wait till next week!! shame shame..lol Thanks for the updates! I do love your story, and I think I am first!! HAHA
next week?????? man why some writers like so much to torture us poor readers????..lol..serious now i can see the real Bette and i hope she get home and talk to Tina real talk no more hide..ok great chappy :o)
lol..great post like always…even if i gotta wait till next week..i know its gonna be a hell of a good post!
Some people has a funny way of listening to other. Sometime I think of how blue the sky is,what i’mgoing to cook.If i need to clean the bathroon.while looking at the and not listening. Bette does it best. Someone needs to kick both of there butts and set them on the right road. Weare all guilty of this. thanks
You don’t have to post every day. I will take whatever you can give us. Thanks so much for sharing this story, and I am glad they are going to worke it out. So next week it is, I will be waiting.
I’m enjoying this….Last Stop Inn? I’ve stayed there.
Tease. thanks
Hey crush I’m just catching up OMG! Whoa! are you really Ending this Story you know that I’m been reading this from the beginning and it’s really Beautiful Amazing writing you’re crate and just really SAD! that this is going to be Ending Whoa! I Love the connection of Bette and Tina but it’s really hard for me to follow to read emotionally this Story it’s really SAD I love you’re writing ability you’re really Amazing Writer you have a very good great gift of talent so PLS. Explore that talent to write and I’m hoping another Story coming LOL! I hope so too Thanks for this Wonderful Awesome Story! what ever happen to Tibette if they are together or NOT it’s OK! LOL! but I’m just really thankful for you’re Story I’m really Enjoy reading it again Thanks.
What a good tease and great chapters. Ok can’t wait to see Bette coming home. Post soon please, thanks!
The Last Stop Inn me too I stay there very nice place.
Glad you’re going to continue. Still not sure what took 6hrs with Henry and Tina still needs to come clean relative to seeing Helena when Bette’s gone and having her at the house. That deception could cost her again and whining to Bette may not work this time.
I just caught up with the past couple of chapters but now I don’t think I’ll make it till next week!! Can’t wait to see what happens!
God I don’t think I’ve ever wanted to smack 2 fictional characters so badly in my entire life!!! Can’t wait until next week.
“phew” just read the whole story,couldnt pull myself away from it.love this story,waiting on the next chapter
Well thank God I was out of town and didn’t know there wouldn’t be anymore till nextweek. Great update though, so glad Bette listened. Please when she gets home can we have at least some peace/love.
well i’ll jus be damned!!!!! this iz by far the sweetest phone conversation i’ve ever heard. OMG especially when bette called back 2 say i love you. DAMN!!!!!!!!this iz 2 beautiful of a story to quit on. please post on ur off days or sumthin please don’t leave me this way!!!!!!!!!!! I DON’T THINK I CAN TAKE IT!!!!!!!
a week!! ok i can live with that crush rite on!! keep it coming
Hey Crush,
That was loverly and bootiful.
A little slice of heaven to brighten up my day.
Now, I am hoping that a sequel will evolve to resolve all of the issue so far raised.
You cannot do me out of the pleasure of the recommitment ceremony.
Please, please, pretty please continue this soon.
Your fan.
sounds like a star wars ending theme there. LOL. juz caught with the finale chapters. been out of town. way to goooo…..post soon!!