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What will she do next-Finale part two (b)
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“So if you’re okay was this some kinda joke? Why the ***** couldn’t you call somebody?! Or at least answer your cell?” Kit interrupted angrily once again.
“II kinda broke my phoneand then had some car trouble and by the time I got to help it was too late to call you and I”
“You should have called meno matter what the timeI mean I could have come pick you up”
“Kit, I was driving along the Pacific Coast Highway and I ended up past way past Newport beach, I’m not even certain where exactly I am, but it would have been too much for you to come get me.” Bette explained logically.
“Well, Tina could have,” Kit stated blandly, “Anything would have been better than you spending the nightwhere did you say?”
“Oh it’s called the Last Stop Inn or something like thatthere’s only one telephone and no place to eat or even a caf.” Bette ended.
“Hmm, sounds like someplace I should open a chain” Kit spoke absently and then quickly returned back to the task of telling her little sister off.
“Well I’m glad that you are all right but now you have to call Tina and let her knowshe was worried si”
“I thought that you might do that.” Bette spoke softly, ” I really don’t think that I can deal with her right now Kitcould you do this please?” Bette pleaded.
Kit was silent for a moment and it appeared as though she were thinking it over.
“No.” she replied bluntly.
“What?!” Bette nearly choked at the sudden negative response.
“You need to deal with this now, and stop letting things, and people, and some dude called Harry or Henry or whatever his damn name is get in the way. YOU need to talk to her and keep talking to her and ***** LISTEN to what she has to say. And don’t call me back until you do, and go straight to her. Come see me when you get back today.” And with that she was gone.
Bette stood there in the dingy dusty callbox with the receiver in her hand listening to the dialling tone, stunned.
*
Alice watched as Tina paced back and forth in front of her with Angelica desperately trying to breast feed off of her right breast.
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awww..making us wait till next week!! shame shame..lol Thanks for the updates! I do love your story, and I think I am first!! HAHA
next week?????? man why some writers like so much to torture us poor readers????..lol..serious now i can see the real Bette and i hope she get home and talk to Tina real talk no more hide..ok great chappy :o)
lol..great post like always…even if i gotta wait till next week..i know its gonna be a hell of a good post!
Some people has a funny way of listening to other. Sometime I think of how blue the sky is,what i’mgoing to cook.If i need to clean the bathroon.while looking at the and not listening. Bette does it best. Someone needs to kick both of there butts and set them on the right road. Weare all guilty of this. thanks
You don’t have to post every day. I will take whatever you can give us. Thanks so much for sharing this story, and I am glad they are going to worke it out. So next week it is, I will be waiting.
I’m enjoying this….Last Stop Inn? I’ve stayed there.
Tease. thanks
Hey crush I’m just catching up OMG! Whoa! are you really Ending this Story you know that I’m been reading this from the beginning and it’s really Beautiful Amazing writing you’re crate and just really SAD! that this is going to be Ending Whoa! I Love the connection of Bette and Tina but it’s really hard for me to follow to read emotionally this Story it’s really SAD I love you’re writing ability you’re really Amazing Writer you have a very good great gift of talent so PLS. Explore that talent to write and I’m hoping another Story coming LOL! I hope so too Thanks for this Wonderful Awesome Story! what ever happen to Tibette if they are together or NOT it’s OK! LOL! but I’m just really thankful for you’re Story I’m really Enjoy reading it again Thanks.
What a good tease and great chapters. Ok can’t wait to see Bette coming home. Post soon please, thanks!
The Last Stop Inn me too I stay there very nice place.
Glad you’re going to continue. Still not sure what took 6hrs with Henry and Tina still needs to come clean relative to seeing Helena when Bette’s gone and having her at the house. That deception could cost her again and whining to Bette may not work this time.
I just caught up with the past couple of chapters but now I don’t think I’ll make it till next week!! Can’t wait to see what happens!
God I don’t think I’ve ever wanted to smack 2 fictional characters so badly in my entire life!!! Can’t wait until next week.
“phew” just read the whole story,couldnt pull myself away from it.love this story,waiting on the next chapter
Well thank God I was out of town and didn’t know there wouldn’t be anymore till nextweek. Great update though, so glad Bette listened. Please when she gets home can we have at least some peace/love.
well i’ll jus be damned!!!!! this iz by far the sweetest phone conversation i’ve ever heard. OMG especially when bette called back 2 say i love you. DAMN!!!!!!!!this iz 2 beautiful of a story to quit on. please post on ur off days or sumthin please don’t leave me this way!!!!!!!!!!! I DON’T THINK I CAN TAKE IT!!!!!!!
a week!! ok i can live with that crush rite on!! keep it coming
Hey Crush,
That was loverly and bootiful.
A little slice of heaven to brighten up my day.
Now, I am hoping that a sequel will evolve to resolve all of the issue so far raised.
You cannot do me out of the pleasure of the recommitment ceremony.
Please, please, pretty please continue this soon.
Your fan.
sounds like a star wars ending theme there. LOL. juz caught with the finale chapters. been out of town. way to goooo…..post soon!!