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What will she do next-Finale part two (b)
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“Well can I at least tell you what happened quickly? You don’t have to say anything but it would give you something to think about on the journey home?” Tina asked expectedly.
“Fine,” Bette answered. She really didn’t want to have this conversation on an empty stomach and feeling sweaty and grimy, standing outside in a call box, but if Tina wanted to explain herself, Bette was not going to stop her.
Tina sighed loudly and then began.
“Baby do you remember the day at the beach?” she asked carefully.
“Of course I do T? It was only a couple of days agoI mean I know that I’m a few years older than you but there’s no need to imply”
“Bette!” Tina said sharply, causing Bette to stop her babbling and listen.
“What?” she asked softly.
“Well you know how I do that passive aggressive thing? Well you do that, I’m not listening to anything that I don’t want to hear so I will babble until the other party stops talking or at least says something that I want to hear thing. Tina ended with a chuckle.
“Oh,” Bette said softly and then continued, “I do, don’t I?” Tina could hear that she was smiling.
“You had me so worried Bette.”
“I’m sorry.”
“And when you wouldn’t answer your cell, well I knew you were mad at me, but I thought that you’d at least speak to Kit”
“Iumlost it.” Bette said sheepishly, the full realisation of her actions upon her now as she stood waiting for the tow truck.
“What do you mean?” Tina quizzed.
“I got mad and threw it out of the car” Bette put her hand to her forehead in shame.
“Ah Bette.”
“Will you listen now? Can I tell you at least part of it?” Tina asked.
“Go ahead.”
“Well you know that I was preparing a special dinner for us and I wanted to get some groceries and”
“T?” Bette interrupted
“Yeah babe?”
“Umm the tow truck is gonna be here in like no time so can you kind of speed things up a bit?”
Tina laughed nervously.
“Okay.”
“Thanks.”
“So he was at the store and he asked me out for a drink. We went over to the caf across from the mall and we just got to talking, and it was then that I realised that I was just really flattered by his advancesit was kind of fascinating, you know? Haven’t you ever felt like that Bette?”
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awww..making us wait till next week!! shame shame..lol Thanks for the updates! I do love your story, and I think I am first!! HAHA
next week?????? man why some writers like so much to torture us poor readers????..lol..serious now i can see the real Bette and i hope she get home and talk to Tina real talk no more hide..ok great chappy :o)
lol..great post like always…even if i gotta wait till next week..i know its gonna be a hell of a good post!
Some people has a funny way of listening to other. Sometime I think of how blue the sky is,what i’mgoing to cook.If i need to clean the bathroon.while looking at the and not listening. Bette does it best. Someone needs to kick both of there butts and set them on the right road. Weare all guilty of this. thanks
You don’t have to post every day. I will take whatever you can give us. Thanks so much for sharing this story, and I am glad they are going to worke it out. So next week it is, I will be waiting.
I’m enjoying this….Last Stop Inn? I’ve stayed there.
Tease. thanks
Hey crush I’m just catching up OMG! Whoa! are you really Ending this Story you know that I’m been reading this from the beginning and it’s really Beautiful Amazing writing you’re crate and just really SAD! that this is going to be Ending Whoa! I Love the connection of Bette and Tina but it’s really hard for me to follow to read emotionally this Story it’s really SAD I love you’re writing ability you’re really Amazing Writer you have a very good great gift of talent so PLS. Explore that talent to write and I’m hoping another Story coming LOL! I hope so too Thanks for this Wonderful Awesome Story! what ever happen to Tibette if they are together or NOT it’s OK! LOL! but I’m just really thankful for you’re Story I’m really Enjoy reading it again Thanks.
What a good tease and great chapters. Ok can’t wait to see Bette coming home. Post soon please, thanks!
The Last Stop Inn me too I stay there very nice place.
Glad you’re going to continue. Still not sure what took 6hrs with Henry and Tina still needs to come clean relative to seeing Helena when Bette’s gone and having her at the house. That deception could cost her again and whining to Bette may not work this time.
I just caught up with the past couple of chapters but now I don’t think I’ll make it till next week!! Can’t wait to see what happens!
God I don’t think I’ve ever wanted to smack 2 fictional characters so badly in my entire life!!! Can’t wait until next week.
“phew” just read the whole story,couldnt pull myself away from it.love this story,waiting on the next chapter
Well thank God I was out of town and didn’t know there wouldn’t be anymore till nextweek. Great update though, so glad Bette listened. Please when she gets home can we have at least some peace/love.
well i’ll jus be damned!!!!! this iz by far the sweetest phone conversation i’ve ever heard. OMG especially when bette called back 2 say i love you. DAMN!!!!!!!!this iz 2 beautiful of a story to quit on. please post on ur off days or sumthin please don’t leave me this way!!!!!!!!!!! I DON’T THINK I CAN TAKE IT!!!!!!!
a week!! ok i can live with that crush rite on!! keep it coming
Hey Crush,
That was loverly and bootiful.
A little slice of heaven to brighten up my day.
Now, I am hoping that a sequel will evolve to resolve all of the issue so far raised.
You cannot do me out of the pleasure of the recommitment ceremony.
Please, please, pretty please continue this soon.
Your fan.
sounds like a star wars ending theme there. LOL. juz caught with the finale chapters. been out of town. way to goooo…..post soon!!