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What will she do next-Finale part two (b)
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“T? Don’t you think that you should sit down to do that?” Alice asked, feeling sorry for the poor child who was inadvertently suffering at the hands of her mother’s distress.
“What? Oh yeahokay,” Tina spoke absently while plopping herself down on the sofa next to Alice.
“It will be okay” Alice began softly causing Tina to explode in an outburst.
“How do you know? No one can really knowOh my GodBette could be lying somewhere upside down in her car in a ditchwhat have I done? What have I done?”
Tina was beginning to wail again and Alice tried desperately to calm her for Angelica’s sake and well for her own sake. Alice really couldn’t handle Tina like this just now as Tina’s emotional state was too close to how she had felt when Dana and her had broke up.
“Shh TLook at Angieshe needs to finish her brunch” It seemed to be working as Tina’s breathing evened out once more and she focused on feeding her beautiful child who looked so much like her missing partner.
Tina passed Angelica over to Alice to burp her just as the telephone rang causing both of them to jump. Tina looked at Alice for a split second before she leapt up and made a dash for the phone.
Not recognising the area code she answered carefully.
“Hello?”
“It’s me”
“Bette!” Tina gasped and Alice released the breath that she had been holding.
“Where have you been? Are you all right? Please forgive me” Tina babbled out incoherently with out much thought.
“I’m fine. Why does everyone keep asking me that?” Bette answered evenly.
“Bette,” Tina began again quickly, “I’m sorry, I didn’t think, again and the wrong things came out of my mouth before I could explain myself properly.” Tina ended.
“Come on baby let’s go play by the pool”Alice said softly getting up and giving Tina the privacy that she needed to confess and bear her soul to her partner.
“Tina I can’t do this nowI’m waiting for the breakdown people and I don’t want to end our conversation abruptly.”
“Where are you Bette?”
“I have no idea,” Bette replied honestly, ” I gave the telephone number to the service centre and they located me that way. It’sit’s kinda deserted.” Bette continued suddenly taking in her environment.
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awww..making us wait till next week!! shame shame..lol Thanks for the updates! I do love your story, and I think I am first!! HAHA
next week?????? man why some writers like so much to torture us poor readers????..lol..serious now i can see the real Bette and i hope she get home and talk to Tina real talk no more hide..ok great chappy :o)
lol..great post like always…even if i gotta wait till next week..i know its gonna be a hell of a good post!
Some people has a funny way of listening to other. Sometime I think of how blue the sky is,what i’mgoing to cook.If i need to clean the bathroon.while looking at the and not listening. Bette does it best. Someone needs to kick both of there butts and set them on the right road. Weare all guilty of this. thanks
You don’t have to post every day. I will take whatever you can give us. Thanks so much for sharing this story, and I am glad they are going to worke it out. So next week it is, I will be waiting.
I’m enjoying this….Last Stop Inn? I’ve stayed there.
Tease. thanks
Hey crush I’m just catching up OMG! Whoa! are you really Ending this Story you know that I’m been reading this from the beginning and it’s really Beautiful Amazing writing you’re crate and just really SAD! that this is going to be Ending Whoa! I Love the connection of Bette and Tina but it’s really hard for me to follow to read emotionally this Story it’s really SAD I love you’re writing ability you’re really Amazing Writer you have a very good great gift of talent so PLS. Explore that talent to write and I’m hoping another Story coming LOL! I hope so too Thanks for this Wonderful Awesome Story! what ever happen to Tibette if they are together or NOT it’s OK! LOL! but I’m just really thankful for you’re Story I’m really Enjoy reading it again Thanks.
What a good tease and great chapters. Ok can’t wait to see Bette coming home. Post soon please, thanks!
The Last Stop Inn me too I stay there very nice place.
Glad you’re going to continue. Still not sure what took 6hrs with Henry and Tina still needs to come clean relative to seeing Helena when Bette’s gone and having her at the house. That deception could cost her again and whining to Bette may not work this time.
I just caught up with the past couple of chapters but now I don’t think I’ll make it till next week!! Can’t wait to see what happens!
God I don’t think I’ve ever wanted to smack 2 fictional characters so badly in my entire life!!! Can’t wait until next week.
“phew” just read the whole story,couldnt pull myself away from it.love this story,waiting on the next chapter
Well thank God I was out of town and didn’t know there wouldn’t be anymore till nextweek. Great update though, so glad Bette listened. Please when she gets home can we have at least some peace/love.
well i’ll jus be damned!!!!! this iz by far the sweetest phone conversation i’ve ever heard. OMG especially when bette called back 2 say i love you. DAMN!!!!!!!!this iz 2 beautiful of a story to quit on. please post on ur off days or sumthin please don’t leave me this way!!!!!!!!!!! I DON’T THINK I CAN TAKE IT!!!!!!!
a week!! ok i can live with that crush rite on!! keep it coming
Hey Crush,
That was loverly and bootiful.
A little slice of heaven to brighten up my day.
Now, I am hoping that a sequel will evolve to resolve all of the issue so far raised.
You cannot do me out of the pleasure of the recommitment ceremony.
Please, please, pretty please continue this soon.
Your fan.
sounds like a star wars ending theme there. LOL. juz caught with the finale chapters. been out of town. way to goooo…..post soon!!