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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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“Yes” Bette offered cautiously, her hands wringing the steering wheel.
“Okay, now for my next weird question. Are you with her daughter right now? Or know where she is?”
Bette had just pulled up to a red light and was grateful for it because she froze at the sound of Melissa’s words. Her heart began to race, her throat constricting. Somehow she found the ability to speak.
“Where is she?”
“LAX”
Bette let out a deep shaky breath of relief as she let her head fall back against the head rest. Tears flowed from her eyes as a smile spread across her face.
“Thank God” She whispered.
Having been overcome with emotion at finding out Angie’s whereabouts, Bette had momentarily forgotten one crucial detail of the whole ordeal. It wasn’t until Melissa’s dreaded voice spilled through the speakers that Bette was brought back to reality.
“Bette? A man has her. I had assumed he was her father but she doesn’t seem to like him”
“They only share DNA” Bette snapped as she glared at the red light, silently willing it to change. “I know it’s a lot to ask but can you please keep an eye on them? I’m not far away, I’ll be there as soon as I can”
“Of course. I won’t let them out of my sight”
Melissa rattled off her exact location before the dashboard screen indicated another incoming call. It was Kit.
“Thank you, Melissa. Really .. I can’t even begin to tell you ..”
With her emotions getting the better of her, Bette’s voice began to crack to which Melissa opted to spare the brunette from finishing her sentence.
“You’re more than welcome. I’m just glad I spotted them when I did. Now, hurry and get your butt over here. I’m gonna speak to the flight attendant and have this flight delayed”
“I owe you. Big time” Bette smiled through her tears as she ended the call to answer Kit’s, “Kit, I know where Angie is!”
“So do we” Kit’s voice was both happy and anxious, “That’s what I was calling to tell you. Tina and I are in one of the police cars, we’re on our way there now”
Bette glanced at Jan with a raised eyebrow to see that her best friend had the same confused look, “How did you find out?”
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!