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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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“Someone called 911. The officers were radioed back at the house and we left a second after”
Figuring that Melissa had been the one to call 911, Bette said a silent thanks to the raven haired angel. She owed the sculptor more than she could ever hope to repay. Still, Bette made a mental note to do something nice for her.
“Wait” Kit said when Bette’s initial words finally processed in her mind, “How did you guys find out about Angie?”
“Long story” Bette replied as she made a sharp turn onto a busy street, earring a series of curses from her best friend. “How far are you guys from the airport?”
“Not far. What’s going on over there? Why is Jan screaming?”
“Another long story” Bette answered as she swerved around a number of cars, her own increasing in speed. Jan held onto her seat with all her might, praying they would arrive at the airport safely. “Fill you in later. See you soon”
She ended the call and focused on the road ahead, urgency running through her like nothing she ever felt before.
Momma’s coming Angie. Just hold on
***
Bette ran down the long terminal so fast she had left Jan behind, apologizing to every person she bumped into. Her heart raced with more than just exertion, anxious to reach Angie in addition to fear of the unknown causing her to run that much faster. It wasn’t until she spotted Melissa that she slowed to a jog, her chest heaving with her rapid breaths.
The raven haired sculptor had been positioned in a crouch, attending to the toddler sitting on a chair in front of her as she handed her a cookie. Her child.
“Angie” Bette whispered as she began to walk towards the pair, her chest beating even faster than before.
As if she had heard Bette’s barely audible voice, Angie turned and saw the brunette making her way over. Instantly she was shoving the cookie at Melissa and sliding off the chair to run towards Bette.
“Momma!”
Bette instantly began to cry at the sound of that precious word, laughing through her tears as she felt her once broken heart suddenly whole. She quickened her steps as she cried, resuming her jog to meet Angie.
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!