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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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Carmen immediately nodded at her girlfriend’s idea, hope filling her. “Of course. Shane and I will drive around and look for Angie”
“Us too” Alice spoke as she glanced at Dana, “We came in our own car so we’ll go out too. The more people searching for Angie the better”
Bette couldn’t help the tears that flowed freely down her face. She couldn’t have asked for better friends. With her thanks, the four women hugged Bette before leaving out the way they came to begin their search.
“God, I should be out there” Bette cried as she wiped her tears with their bare wrist. She had removed her jacket sometime ago, saving it from the stain of her endless tears.
“I think the best thing for you and Tina is just to stay here” Jan rubbed her friends back as she glanced over at the distraught blonde still engaged in conversation with the police officer.
“How is she?” Kit asked as she followed Jan’s line of sight, watching as Tina wiped the tears from her grief-stricken face.
“A fucking mess” Bette chuckled as she covered her mouth with a shaky hand, her own tears sliding down her face. She wiped them away before looking up to the ceiling, willing the next round of them away. “She’s trying to keep it together but I can tell she’s falling apart inside”
“Oh Bette” Kit’s lips quivered at the sound of her baby sister’s broken voice, watching as she desperately tried to get a handle on her emotions. Never before had she seen her baby sister seem so heartbroken, the sight breaking her own heart.
“I just don’t understand why he would do this” Bette burst out, her tears falling more freely. “Things had been going so good between him and Tina. He was allowed to see Angie whenever he wanted. There was no reason to take her”
“Psychos don’t need a reason to do the things they do” Jan replied stroking her friend’s arm as she glanced at Kit. The look of warning she received from the older Porter was more than enough for her to correct her words. She didn’t want Bette any more worried than she already was. “I mean .. not that he’s a psycho or anything”
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!