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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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“He was here?”
Tina felt a sharp pang in her heart at the sound of Bette’s quivering voice, whipping around to meet a look of confusion and anger. It made Tina sick.
Bette continued as she took a step closer to the blonde, her hands at her sides shaking with the intense emotion she felt. “He was here and you didn’t tell me?”
Tina’s throat suddenly felt dry, her tears streaming down her face. “Bette, I-”
“When?” The brunette cut in, her voice so low it was menacing. Kit and Jan behind her, standing deathly still. “When did he come here?”
Tina looked up to Bette with pleading eyes, praying that her answer wouldn’t destroy one of the best things she had in her life. The way Bette was currently looking at her however, Tina had little faith things would work out for the better.
“On my birthday. Before we went to dinner”
Tina watched as Bette processed the information, most likely running the day through her mind. The blonde could easily see Bette trying to decipher the exact time the incident occurred, knowing they had spent the majority of the day together.
Then just like that, Tina watched as Bette made sense of the situation and it broke her heart. Bette’s eyes met hers with a look the blonde had never before seen directed at her. Betrayal.
“When you told me some random drunk guy had rang the doorbell .. that was him?”
There was no point in denying anything and even if there was, Tina would have still opted for the truth. She was filled with immense guilt, unable to shake the feeling that the entire situation could have been prevented if she had spoken up in the first place.
“Yes” Tina croaked before reaching out to her angry girlfriend, “But let me expla-”
Bette flinched as if she had been hit, stepping back and away from Tina. “Don’t”
“Bette please” Tina cried as she looked to the brunette with desperation, panic seizing her entire body. Whatever was left of her world was crumbling down faster than she could think. Kevin had Angie and now she was losing Bette. Tina thought she would faint, “It’s not what you think. I just didn’t want to ruin our night out. I was going to tell you, I promise”
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!