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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Pushing back and sitting on her heels, Tina angled her head. “I want you desperately.” Tina reached for the top tie of the blouse. It was tied about two and a half inches below the rounded collar. She pulled the fabric and it unknotted exposing a bit of skin. Tina changed positions and sat cross-legged on the bed beside Bette. She bent and kissed her chest lightly before moving to the next tie that fell just between her *****. Again, Tina pulled and it untied. “You look beautiful, Bette.” Bette grinned at her.
Tina bent and placed a tiny kiss on the exposed part of each of Bette’s ***** before she moved lower to pull the last tie. When she did, Tina opened the top fully with both front panels lying on the bed, framing Bette’s upper body. The cobalt blue bra looked stunning on her. Her ***** virtually spilled out of it. Tina bent, but before she could do anything at all, Bette rose, leaned forward, and grabbed Tina by the shoulders, pulling her to her mouth.
Bette’s legs bent and she was on her knees instantly. She pushed Tina onto the bed and sat astride her. “Nuh-uh.” She leaned down and kissed Tina who was surprised to be back in this position. Bette’s shirt hung open and in the way. When she broke from the kiss, she pulled her arms through the sleeves and threw the top across the room. Tina was panting, her eyes gone dark and hidden behind heavy lids. She stared at Bette who bent again and pressed her tongue that was hard and wide against Tina’s neck, pushing against the vein before she began to lick up and down it. Bette was eager to move on and lower. One hand traveled swiftly down Tina’s green nightgown to the hem that fell just at her calf, the other hand moved just as fast, but didn’t travel as far. This hand massaged Tina’s shoulder, then moved inward. Bette’s hand covered Tina’s breast through the gown. The nipple was hard and stood tall, pressing against the material. Bette’s fingers spread and she captured the nipple between her fore and middle fingers, bringing the fingers together to pinch and roll the hardened point. “Oh.” Tina groaned.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!