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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Bette’s other hand slid under the hem of the nightgown and up Tina’s skin. “Your skin is so soft, baby. Feels so nice.” Her hand slithered up her leg, moving across the outer thigh, past the curve of her hips and waist, further up her body until she reached her breast. There, Bette squeezed the full flesh and with one finger, circled the tight nipple, pushing down hard, pressing the nipple into the breast. This sent Tina soaring. “Oh, oh.”
Bette struggled to raise the nightgown. Tina lifted her ***** and Bette slid it up, leaving the material resting on Tina’s chest while she bent to her *****. Her touch started off gently with tender kisses all over the creamy flesh, but soon, Tina was arching up, trying to get Bette to do more. Bette followed instruction and as her mouth captured much of her breast, Bette’s tongue licked her nipple, then began an earnest sucking. Bette pressed Tina’s ***** together, pressing them toward each other. She licked the nipples simultaneously and opened her mouth and bit down on each one. Tina’s legs bent and she spread them for Bette. Bette paused and looked at her. She said, “I love you,” and then scraped her teeth across the heavy *****. She tweaked her nipples and licked all around the mounds of flesh.
“Oh, Bette, this feels so good,” Tina whispered.
Bette moved up and kissed her mouth. Again and again, Bette would suck Tina’s ***** and then move to her mouth and suck on Tina’s tongue. When Bette kissed her, her hands took the place of her mouth, rubbing and caressing her ***** until her mouth grew jealous and had to return for more. Tina’s back arched dramatically, her legs spread more, and her heat began to rise. Bette’s body and hands moved down between Tina’s legs, her fingers played lightly against the remarkably smooth skin of Tina’s inner thighs and acted disinterested in the secret that lay between her legs. Her fingers came close to the triangle of hair, but moved away. “Please, baby?” Tina pleaded.
Bette lay beside Tina so that her head was next to Tina’s breast. Tina turned on her side with one leg on the bed, the other akimbo with her foot on the bed and her leg bent at the knee. Bette tenderly sucked on her breast while her other hand teased and taunted Tina, always coming so close to where she wanted it, but not quite. “Bette? Baby? Touch me.”
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!