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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Once the request was made in such a nice way, Bette felt compelled to respond. Her entire hand cupped Tina between her legs, but her middle finger moved between the outer lips. Bette moaned.
Slowly, Bette began long, luxurious strokes against Tina’s *****. She looked up at her lover, watching her face as she experienced the pleasure of her touch. Tina sighed deeply and her eyes slowly closed as her face turned to look at Bette. Before her eyes completely closed, she saw Bette smiling at her as she moved rhythmically against her finger. “Aaaaah.”
Tina needed Bette’s mouth more than she could say. Instead of pushing Bette down the bed, she moved up a little, hinting to her what she wanted. Bette laughed and crawled down the bed and between Tina’s legs. One hand came up to caress Tina’s breast while the other hand assisted Bette’s mouth in giving pleasure. Bette bent to the task, moving her tongue against the coarse hairs of Tina’s magnificent bush and then using her tongue to open her up. When Bette’s expert mouth began to seriously eat her, Tina nearly howled. Her body leapt from the bed and then gained control and settled in to enjoy what Bette did better than anything. Tina’s hand grabbed the headboard and tilted it forward enough that she could watch Bette make love to her. It was so hot to see those long, brown wavy locks moving back and forth and up and down between her legs. And the way Bette’s mouth moved—she put everything she had into it. Bette’s tongue was on one side of Tina’s ***** licking the slick nub while her fingers moved up and down her swollen labia, then just as quickly her tongue was biting and nipping at the outer lips and her fingers were flicking over her hard clitoris. Tina was moaning continuously. Her hands were in Bette’s hair holding her in place, encouraging her, and bracing herself for the ***** that wasn’t far off. Bette teased Tina’s hole, circling the entrance with her finger, then with her tongue, but not entering. Instead, returning again and again to her clitoris that had grown incredibly harder. Bette sucked Tina’s ***** into her mouth and gently pulled on it while her tongue swirled around the sensitive base of it. Bette used her hand to open Tina fully, pulling back the lips, making her taut and completely exposed. Every nerve ending was awake, demanding attention and getting it. “Oh, oh, oh. Oh, God. Oh.” Tina’s body was a moment away from quivering in wicked release, but she pushed Bette away, then pulled her up to her so that Bette lay on top of her. Bette pressed her lithe body against Tina’s and kissed her mouth, trying to swallow her or be swallowed by her.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!