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You (Part the Third)
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Sensing her friend’s conflicted feelings, Helena reached over and took her hand. They rode in companionable silence for a few blocks until Alice’s disturbingly shrill ringtone went off. “Shit, it’s Dana,” Alice said, looking at Helena with such a panicked expression that Helena couldn’t stop herself from giggling. “Should I answer it? Helena, help me out here, okay? What the fuck do I say? Should I even answer it? Fuck!”
“Well, I think it’d be considered rude not to. Hurry up, or she’ll think you’re being mean and will leave you a nasty message on your voicemail.” Helena was still laughing. This had turned out better than she’d expected. After Alice had told her about that morning’s talk at Dana’s condo, she’d known it would be incredibly awkward for the two to start talking again. As upset as Helena was at the way Dana (and the rest of their friends) had been treating Alice lately, she did believe that the two of them had something special. The dumping-of-sex-toys plan had simply been a ruse to get them to start speaking again. If they didn’t, who knew when either would have the courage to break their self-imposed no direct contact rule, which Helena found pretty silly in the first place. A person needs their best friend, especially in a breakup. Which was why Helena’s face lit up as Alice answered brightly.
“Hi, Dana! What’s up?”
Dana had stepped outside so she could have a semi-private conversation, rather than one that could be heard by both customers and staff. “Alice…what the fuck was that?!”
Alice was relieved to hear that Dana’s surprise was outweighing her anger, at least for the moment. “Look, Dane, it wasn’t personal…well okay, maybe it was personal but you know what I mean. I’m trying here, I really am. I’m sorry.” And suddenly she was crying again, and this time it had nothing to do with the pills. She just hated her life.
Dana heard the quiet sobs on the other end, and decided not to make it a big deal. Because, honestly, it wasn’t. Sure, it was embarrassing, but at least Alice hadn’t made a big scene that would have drawn it out. “Okay. Apology accepted. But you have to stop doing this shit, all right? I’m more than willing to help you, but you have to get ahold of yourself. Which means you can’t keep coming into the Planet and doing psycho things. Okay? Please?”
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)