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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    The cop signaled for Shane’s lane to go and as she neared the cop she slowed down and rolled her window down. “Hey! Thanks a lot for doing your job man I know this must be a pain for you!” she had to yell over the inexplicably loud sound of water hitting asphalt.

    “No problem Ms. and you’re welcome” he tipped his hat to her and continued on with his job while Shane continued on with her driving.

    “Who was that? Are you buying drugs? Are you thanking your DEALER FOR SUPPLYING YOU WITH DRUGS?!” Alice sounded a little frantic.

    “Alice, it was a cop and I was thanking him for directing traffic. Stop being so paranoid ya freak”

    “Oh, ok I’ve put this off for long enough, you know the drill, who what where why and when?” Alice always did this to her closest friends. That inquiring ache she got didn’t stop at her job as a journalist but extended itself into her daily life. She had to know everything and then tell everything, biggest gossip L.A. has ever seen.

    “Carmen, chill, movie, just because, now. Bye!” She flipped off her phone when she pulled up to the house near Olympic and La Cienega. It was the first time Shane had ever been to Carmen’s house and she couldn’t stop her stomach from doing back flips. Taking a quick glance around, she attempted to get a good feel of the place through the never ending rain. The neighborhood seemed very safe with its neatly kept lawns and white picket fences.

    The house itself looked very much like a home even from the outside. It was a one-story painted egg-white with baby blue shudders that were currently open. It had a nice front yard with emerald green grass and a cement walkway that led right from the porch to the entrance gate. Well it wasn’t so much a gate as it was a waist-high picket fence with hinges on it. A basketball net was perched above the garage door and a blue sedan was parked in the driveway. ‘Nice place’.

    Shane readied herself to make the run for the front door where there was some shelter from the downpour. ‘Ah *****, I’m gonna look like a drowned rat by the time I get to her doorstep’. She climbed out of her Jeep and made a mad dash to the door, hopping over the fence and scrambling towards the safe haven of what little coverage the front door provided. Straightening herself out and wiping excess water droplets from her jacket, she lifted up a shaky hand (and she wasn’t that cold) to ring the bell.

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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