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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    The door opened and instead of seeing her stunning gorgeous Carmen, Shane saw the lovely and very concerned looking Carmen’s mom. “Joo must be Shane!” Ms. Morales said in a thick Spanish accent and big toothy smile.

    Shane could see so much of Ms. Morales in Carmen now that she’s seen the woman. Both of them shared the long dark brown hair, shining eyes, and beautiful smile. What they didn’t share was the height or the skin complexion. Ms. Morales was slightly taller and slightly lighter then Carmen.

    “Hi, nice to meet you Ms. Morales” she stuck out a hand for a friendly ‘hello shake’ but was pulled into a bear hug.

    “Round here, we hug. Come, come inside out of this rain and I’ll make you something. Carmen is in her room.” Ms. Morales led Shane into the living room. The first thing she noticed was an incredible smell seeming to come from the kitchen. The second thing was the living room itself. It was very cozy with a fire place at one side and an oak wall unit on the other. Three brown puffy couches sat in a semi-circle around the wall unit and a white piano full of pictures sat to the right of the fire place. On the walls hung more pictures, wedding pictures actually and there were a lot of them.

    “Carmen! Shane est aqu!” Ms. Morales’ loud call echoed through-out the house and shook Shane from her observation.

    “This is a great place you have here Ms. Morales”

    “Oh thank joo miel. Come to the kitchen I make something for joo”

    “Oh, I’m really not that hungr…..”

    “Tonteras!, you need some meat on your bones!” she said in such a tone that meant no further arguments. So Shane conceded and sat at the kitchen table while Ms. Morales finished cooking the rice and beans.

    Shane was still trying to figure out if Ms. Morales knew about her and Carmen. The way she responded to Shane was warm and affectionate but it was probably the way she always was no matter who was at the door. She decided to play it safe and not say anything.

    “Here we go. Now Shane, tell me about yourself” Ms. Morales said while placing a plate of food on the table and sitting across from Shane.

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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