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Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)
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Six months is quite an eternity when you’re living without a purpose, I should know because I went through it. My departure from Florida was complicated to say the least.
“Ashley where the hell have you been?!”
My sister’s voice tears my attention away from the path I was walking down.
“Hmm?” I barely muster
“Ash, we were supposed to leave 10 minutes ago for the airport, Dad is having a conniption, you look like shit and no one could find you all morning”
I felt far away, not in the conversation. She took sympathy on me and I let her lead me to the rental car we used for the week. We were at the airport before I even realized where we were going, I was just going through the motions until it hit me that we were leaving for good.
“I have to go back” I realized
“What? Where? What are you talking about?” Blake asked me looking up from the magazine she was reading
“Spencer, I need…Spencer”
Just saying her name immediately made me tired, she gave me a puzzled look and of course she did. She didn’t know I royally fucked up any chance of ever seeing her again. I sat silent for what felt like days, it might have been days. I was mute, my emotions were all internal, I collapsed on my bed, the first tear hit my pillow and I didn’t move for anything. Days and nights blended together, food wasn’t a priority anymore and sleep occupied most of my time. It was the only time I could see her face. I would wake up in cold sweats at all hours, sometimes screaming, sometimes shaking, but mostly crying. It’s not that I don’t want to think about the details of my relapse it’s that I honestly don’t remember it, most of the time I was in an alternate reality, blacked out and confused about how I got to the place I woke up at. My sister was my lifeline to reality, it didn’t hit me how bad I was effecting her life until it was too late. My selfish ways occupying any chance she had for a decent education and social life.
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Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!
that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!
woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)
YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.
this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!
haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]
Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???
yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!