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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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"I can see that." Dana replied still laughing. It felt good to laugh with everyone again, especially Alice, even though she was drunk.
"Well, I think I am going to attempt to get this one home." Carmen stated, throwing one of Shane’s arms over her shoulder and beginning to lead her toward the exit.
"I guess I am leaving everybody! Wish me luck, huh?" Everyone laughed and waved goodbye.
It was just the four of them left. "Dana, do you think you could get miss Alice here home?" Tina asked sweetly.
"What!?! I can get home just fine on my own thank you very much!" Alice said matter of factly. And just to prove how capable she was, she pushed her chair back dramatically and stood up, throwing her arms in the air as if saying, ‘Ta Da!’ However, she somehow knocked herself off balance and ended up falling. Dana was there in an instant though and caught her before she cracked her head on the table.
"My hero!" Alice said as she clung to Dana for balance.
Dana laughed nervously, not liking the close proximity she now found herself in with the writer.
"Guys, you go ahead, I will get her home." Dana said. She really didn’t think it was a good idea, but she would hate to make Bette and Tina take care of her when they most likely had other events planned for the rest of their evening.
"You sure Dana? We could drop her off…" Bette stated.
"No. It’s ok. You guys go have fun. I’ll get her to bed….I mean home." Dana corrected herself, hoping that her two friends didn’t notice her face turning red.
"Aright then, by Dane. Alice, good luck with your hangover!" Tina said as she ruffled the blonds hair and kissed her goodbye.
"Hey, you messed my hair up! Not cool Kennard! Not cool. I put some effort into this look!" Alice pouted.
"And you did a lovely job my dear." Bette finished, waving to her friends as she and Tina made their way out.
"Ok Alice. Let’s get you home." Dana reached down and took her friends hand. Alice immediately laced her fingers with Dana’s. Dana stopped to look at her questioningly for a minute.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x