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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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"Hey Dane, who’s Lara?" Shane asked as she walked into the kitchen with a racket in her hand.
"Oh, she’s just a girl I met at the club. She’s nice." Dana trailed off.
"Nice?" Shane asked with a grin on her face. "Is she a nice friend, or a nice lay?" Shane asked wagging her eyebrows up and down.
"Shane! Is that all you think about?" Dana asked as she lightly punched her friend in the arm.
"Well…yeah actually. I mean pretty much. Have you seen Carmen??? Damn. What else is there to do? Why do you think I am going to all this trouble to impress her?" She said with a smirk. Dana nodded her head understandingly. She was glad that Shane had finally found someone to slow down with.
"Well, for your information, no. We are not sleeping together. I don’t know what we are exactly. I think she wants more, but I don’t know…I guess I always thought that I would end up with…"Dana cut herself off before she finished. ‘Jesus Christ Dana! Don’t you think before you speak these days? That’s how you got into trouble in the first place.’ She scolded herself.
"With who?" Shane asked knowingly. "Who are you going to end up with, Ms. Fairbanks? Anyone I know?" Shane knew exactly who Dana was thinking about, but was trying to see if Dana would admit it to her.
"Huh? Oh nobody. I was just being silly. You know me. Silly me. Oh you found a racket I see. Great! That’s a really nice one." Dana was out of breath from her nervous rant.
Shane just laughed at her friend and wondered how two people like Alice and Dana could both be so thick headed sometimes. Meanwhile, Dana had gone on to listen to the rest of her messages. The next couple were from her trainer and her manager talking about upcoming tournaments and events. The last one was from Alice. Shane pretended not to listen as she walked back into the other room.
"Hey Dane…it’s me. Alice. Fuck. Of course you know it’s me. Listen…I just. I have really missed you…I was hoping that we could talk…I mean I know you said you didn’t want to…but you know…." Alice paused for a moment on the message. Dana could here her take a deep breath and couldn’t help smiling. She was surprised to find herself listening to a tongue tied, seemingly nervous Alice. Those were two things that her friend never seemed to be. "Damn it Dana. This is ridiculous. We are grown women for heaven’s sake. Look…I just want to see you. Maybe we could grab some coffee or something tomorrow…ok. You aren’t home I guess…or you would have picked up by now…right? Ok then. Bye Dana." Then there was the annoying beep signaling the end of the message. Dana didn’t know why, but she found herself saving the message instead of deleting it like all the others. She was still hurt at her friends rejection, but she had missed the writer, too. She sighed as she rounded the corner of the kitchen and ran right into Shane, who was wearing that ‘busted’ look on her face.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x