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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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Dana nodded her head without really thinking about it and waved again.
"Fuck! What did I just agree to!" She said to her empty house.
Alice arrived at the Planet and looked stunning. She was turning heads already and smiled, pleased with her choice in wardrobe. She was wearing a skin tight skirt and a slinky top that accented her breasts and was see-through towards the bottom, revealing her toned stomach.
"Al! Alice over here!" Tina was waving at her friend and had to shout over the loud music and crowd of people that were gathering for a night of drinking and dancing.
Alice saw her friends at the far table and made her way to them.
"Hey ladies, how is everyone?" She asked enthusiastically.
They all said their hello’s as Alice sat down.
"Damn Alice, you look amazing!" Shane said, openly staring at her friend. The rest of the group all nodded their heads in agreement.. Alice blushed and ducked her head as she mumbled her thanks to the group.
"Shane! Enough already! It’s getting weird!" Alice scolded as she realized that Shane was still checking her out.
"Huh? Oh right! Right. Sorry. So Al, who are you dressing to kill for?" She asked, knowing full well who Alice had gone to all the trouble for.
"Why, Shane? Jealous?" Alice said smartly, challenging her friend to go there.
"Well…honestly…right now, I think I’d be pretty justified." Shane said with a wink. Alice laughed and shook her head.
"Shane McCutcheon! What would your girlfriend have to say about this?" Alice said dramatically.
"Yeah…she would probably be a little peeved…but we could always invite her in on the party…" She said with an easy smile.
"Ewww! Shane…you’re weird." Alice stated making a face. "Alright! Enough with the hotness of me. Who’s got the first round?" Alice said with a laugh.
"That would be me!" Bette exclaimed and took everyone’s drink requests.
They spent the next hour talking and laughing. Alice was really hoping to see Dana here tonight, but as more time passed, Alice gave up hope and decided that drinking herself silly was always a good solution to the blues.
She and Shane were good and trashed. Bette and Tina were dancing and Jenny was sipping on her drink as she listened to her drunk friends ramble on about a road trip they had taken years ago. Apparently, they had gone to see a band and nearly ended up spending the night in jail with guy who claimed to be a "lesbian"man named Lisa.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x