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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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Dana eyed her questioningly and Shane just shrugged her shoulders. "What?" she asked innocently. Dana did not know that Shane had been informed of the situation, so she just thought Shane was waiting for her to get the case for the racket she had chosen.
"Well, let me get you the bag for that and you should be all set." Dana went into her spare room and came back out a moment later with the matching case. "Here you go. Just keep it. I have a million of them and now we can play sometime," Dana said with a smile.
"Oh I don’t know about that Fairbanks. I wouldn’t want to bruise your pro tennis playing ego when I wipe the courts with your scrawny ass!" Shane said laughing.
"Oh right! I am so scared Shane. Please, be gentle on me." She said in a mock scared voice.
"Well, you know Dana I would have pegged you as the kinda girl who liked it rough…being a female athlete and all…" Shane said with a straight face. She burst out laughing as Dana turned bright red in embarrassment.
"Fuck you Shane." Dana replied, flipping her friend off for good measure.
"Ok OK. Sorry. Seriously though. Thanks Dane. Wish me luck huh?" Shane said with an easy smile.
"Shane, you know Carmen is not going to buy this for a second, right?" Dana stated.
Shane shrugged her shoulders as she replied. "Who knows what could happen? I might be a good tennis player, maybe Carmen will reward me for the effort at the very least, maybe you will fall in love with…Alice or something. You never know. Crazier things have happened." Shane had to turn away to keep the smile hidden from Dana. She headed for the door and opened it, slinging the racket over her shoulder.
"Bye Dane. Thanks again for the racket! You’re the best." Shane shouted as she walked to her truck.
Dana finally snapped out of her momentary paralysis to mumble and wave her good bye. ‘Wow, that was close!’ she thought. Just as Shane was backing out of her drive, she stopped her car and rolled her window down.
"Oh Dana! I forgot to tell you. A bunch of us are planning on meeting up at the Planet tonight for drinks. You should come. Carmen’s spinning! See you tonight?" Shane shouted.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x