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    A Thin Line – Chpt 31

    Story written on August 8, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Saturday afternoon

    I feigned shock, fanning my face with my hand and batting my eyelids dramatically.

    Bette laughed and picked up her fork to resume eating. “So what do you think of my unconscious, sleep-induced fantasy?” she asked, looking down, addressing me, but talking to her vegetables.

    I reached over, placing my hand under her chin and lifting her head to engage her eyes with mine.

    I stared at her longingly. “I think you’re naughty. And I’m going to do my best to make your dream come true quite soon.”

    Bette leaned in to kiss me with a surprised but satisfied smile. “I look forward to it.”

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    After lunch, we’d changed into our swimming suits and sarongs, and decided to take a walk on the beach.

    “So? Do you think I can persuade you into taking a stab at some more painting, Sweetheart?” I asked, enjoying Helena’s hand interlaced with mine as we strolled along the shoreline..

    “You really liked my paintings?” Helena asked incredulously.

    “Yes, Silly. Didn’t my reaction last night confirm as much?” I asked.

    “Well, if it would make you happy,” she replied, “I suppose I could give it a go.”

    I stopped and turned to stroke her face tenderly.

    “I want you to do it, because I think it will make you happy,” I told her.

    Just then, the surf washed up over our ankles. When it receded, I felt something hard tumble over my foot. Looking down, I espied a gift. I stooped to pick up a marvelous shell that was trying to embed itself in the sand.

    Helena stared at me transfixed as I examined my find.

    “What are you looking at, Darling?” she asked.

    “The intricacy and wonder of natural design. Like we discussed last weekend when we walked on the beach together,” I replied.

    “Let me see,” Helena said inquisitively. “I want to see what you’re seeing.”

    Holding the shell out to her in my palm, I smiled , inwardly and outwardly, as she admired its beauty. She caressed the small conch with her fingertips.

    “Look at its thin lines. How they collide, but ultimately mesh, and perfect one another. Creating an enchanting home. It’s exquisite. And so sensual,” Helena said wondrously. She plucked the sea creature’s former dwelling from my hand and clutched it to her breast, over her heart. “May I keep it? As a remembrance of this day?”

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    1. Congrats on the award, I began reading this story from the link on that page and the award is well deserved. You write with a playful and classy flair that is a rare find. I’ll be reading from here on out.

    2. oh wow Zheese an award, great stuff girl congrats. Now about your chapter I loved it I mean I really really loved it but what’s the matter with you leaving us hanging there????? Post soon okay thanks

    3. It occured to me while reading this that never in my life have I ever gotten into a sarong. So they’re going domestic already? That’s some mojo they’re working.

    4. Congrats on the award. I like that your R and NC-17 chapters are different. Very hot, playful and teasing but not sleazy or common. “A Thinking Woman’s NC-17” if you will.

    5. Congrats on the award. Love this story, and the pace you’ve set for it. What’s the errand, is it a surprise for Helena. You know the more Bette/Helena stories I read the more, I think they would be a very interesting couple if we can’t have B&T. I mean come on, they’re bringing all these other characters into the show this season, why are they not working with what we’ve got. Cos other than Tina, Helena is the only other person that seems like it would work. Cybil Shepard and Marilee Matlin, nothing personal but NOT>

    7. Your award is soooooooo well deserved. I went back today just to reread your story cause it’s the best!!!! This love is so rare they have, you keep it so exciting. So what is our little Bette up to?? Can’t wait to see. Lucky Helena!

    8. really liked the chapter…but don’t keep us waiting too long…the suspense – it’s great, but…well, your writing is fantastic, so it’ll be worth the wait…i’ll stop whining..post soon!!!

    9. Congrats Zheese, I finally know what award you’ve won! :) thanks for the pM, I just got it today. Had been busy, so I hardly come up for air! Actually, the honest truth is, I liked your story more than the sex parts, the more dimensional romantic, warm and fuzzy stuff, and definitely the unexpected surprises that come – like phone calls etc. :D You’re a good writer! Please continue to write whatever comes to your head! :) Great stuff!

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