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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    “So it wasn’t a personal vendetta?” Bette asked.

    “Never. My seeming indifference to you, and to your impassioned plea for funding, when we first met eye-to-eye in my office in New York, was due to the fact that I didn’t want you to sway me. Not because I felt snubbed so many months earlier at MONA. I didn’t want you to know, or to get the sense, that I was attracted to you. If you knew that, you may have been able to use that knowledge to your advantage. I may have done anything to have you. And I did have a Board of Directors to answer to. My coolness toward you was a device to help me maintain my scruples. I did have some, you understand?” I attempted to elucidate.

    “And now?” Bette asked, looking me straight in the eye and questioning me.

    I wasn’t sure from where the frustration inside of me was welling.

    “And now, for Bloody Christ’s sake, I have even more,” I said, becoming agitated. I wanted to scream! “Nobody wants to believe who I am, what I am. Except Alice!”

    I stood up and walked away from Bette to the windows.

    “Helena, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to upset you,” Bette called out to me.

    My volume became distinctly amplified. “Fuck, Bette! What do I have to do to be seen as a credible human being?”

    *****************

    I felt helpless sitting and watching Helena pace back and forth in front of the windows periodically looking out into the darkness. It was obvious to me that she was experiencing emotional turmoil. And I felt responsible for causing it.

    “Helena, do you want me to leave?” I asked softly.

    She stopped pacing and turned to look at me. I could see that her eyes were misted over.

    “No!” she finally choked out.

    I got up and walked towards Helena. We stood toe-to-toe, face-to-face. I reached up, pulled the wet hair from her face, and stroked her cheek gently. When I looked into her eyes, I saw that same imploring look I’d seen now for the third time this weekend.

    “Helena, please, forgive me. I didn’t mean to hurt you or to question your genuineness,” I said.

    “It’s so exasperating to constantly have to defend your motivations. And having money, and growing up privileged, doesn’t always ease our roads. Sometimes it makes them more difficult to contend with,” Helena replied.

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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