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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    “They’re beautiful,” she observed.

    “Aren’t they?” I agreed.

    Helena shifted her body so that she stood directly behind me, her arm around my waist, her mouth against my neck. She ran her left hand down my front, searching with her fingertips to find the slit in the closure of my robe. She curled it back, exposing my pubis to the air. I set the wine glass down and held onto the counter. Dipping down, she languidly caressed my thigh from its mid-section upwards and whispered, “The wine’s legs are beautiful, but not nearly as fascinating as these legs.” She stopped her touch just shy of sensitive flesh. Pulling the cloth of my robe back to its original position to cover me, she returned to my side.

    I turned to face her and wrapped my arms around her waist.

    “Do you have any idea what you’re doing to me?” I inquired softly.

    Helena grinned. “I know what I’d like to be doing to you.” Her lips approached mine and I watched her eyes close, then I closed mine, as we met for a pliant kiss. Our tongues gently mingled. It was a tender kiss, but full of mutual desire. And it ended much too soon.

    Picking up a glass of wine from the counter, Helena said, “If I don’t try to exercise some self-restraint, I’m never going to get dinner prepared for you.”

    “You know, Helena, as much as I look forward to enjoying a sumptuous meal, prepared by your skillful hands,” I said, taking one of hers in mine, “you really don’t need to go to the trouble.” I lifted her hand and kissed the back of it.

    “But, Bette,” Helena protested, “I invited you for dinner. You must be famished. You said so in the pool.”

    I grinned, “When you asked if I was hungry, I did reply that I was famished. But that didn’t necessarily mean for food.”


    “You are mischievous, Bette,” she smiled before adding, “But I really must insist on being a proper hostess and taking care of my guest.”

    “Helena, really, honestly, I’m not all that hungry. Are you?” I asked.

    “No, but…”

    “Then why don’t we just take our wine, and the remainder of that lovely fruit and cheese platter that you so graciously made, and that we barely touched, and go sit and relax somewhere comfortable? That way we can continue to enjoy each other, without your having to work and to be preoccupied with the details of food preparation,” I suggested.

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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