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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“Alice!” Dana finally exclaimed, laughing incredulously and shaking her
head when the blonde looked at her with guileless innocence. Chuckling
affectionately, Dana moved up to capture the writer’s lips for a kiss
and as she pulled away she touched Alice’s cheek. “Why does it not
surprise me that you know way more bad lesbian jokes than I do?”
“Because we both know that you’ve always been the much beloved good
girl with a heart of gold in this relationship whereas I am the looked
down upon bad girl from the wrong side of the tracks,” said Alice
smartly, looking very pleased with her soap opera interpretation of
them.
“Why are you the bad girl from the wrong side of the tracks? You had
just as much money as me growing up,” reminded Dana. She shifted in
Alice’s arms to rest her body half on and half off the blonde,
snuggling into each other’s nooks and crannies and sighing when Alice
held her close and kissed the top of her head. A sudden bout of fatigue
hit her and Dana shuddered, grateful when the writer responded by
holding her close and didn’t question her on it. Lately there had been
little things like that which kept happening and the athlete hated it
with everything in her. During the quiet times like this, when she was
alone with Alice, she wanted to concentrate on them. Not on her illness
and her fight against it. She wanted to think only about how much she
loved Alice and how much Alice loved her. But it was so very hard with
these constant and painfully physical reminders. Still, it was what she
wanted and forcing her eyes open, refusing to give into this slow
moving exhaustion taking her over, Dana peered up at Alice and said, “I
don’t think that there are even tracks in LA for you to be on the wrong
side of, Al.”
“Oh, there’s tracks,” said Alice earnestly, nodding her head and
pointing at Dana. “And I would be on the wrong side of them in this
fictional pulp lesbian 1950′s style universe, Dana. As for why I’m the
bad girl and you aren’t, which one of us practically existed in
detention during high school, hm? I don’t think it was Vice President
Fairbanks of the Student Council.”
“If you’re the bad girl does that mean you would wear leather and drive
a motorcycle?” asked Dana, lifting an eyebrow. “The bad girls are
always in leather and on motorcycles. I think that’s how they get the
good girls to fall for them all the time.”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!