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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“I didn’t call you smelly,” said Dana, managing to look properly
aggrieved. “I said that I knew this wasn’t a dream when I smelled you.
That’s not the same as saying you’re smelly.”
“But you knew it wasn’t a dream because you smelled me and if you
smelled me that much then obviously I’m smelly or you wouldn’t have
smelled anything at all,” said Alice, wearing the strangely triumphant
expression of someone who enjoyed meaningless debate.
“I have no idea what you just said,” said Dana, her brow wrinkling into
an actual frown. Alice chuckled again and darted forward to capture
their lips in a sweet kiss and when she pulled back, Dana smiled as she
pushed a lock of blonde hair from Alice’s eyes. “I didn’t mean that you
smelled bad, Al.” Her blue eyes twinkling, she moved up to rest their
foreheads together to give them each a perfect view of the other. “I
like how you smell.” Then Dana ducked her head before her tongue darted
out to lick a slow path down the writer’s pale neck, delighting in the
taste of her skin as she murmured, “You smell good enough to eat.”
“A bad lesbian sex joke,” drawled Alice sardonically though the fact
she was affectionately nuzzling Dana’s nose with her own took the edge
off her words. “Now we know you’re truly out of the closet. Know any
ones involving fish and nuns?”
“No,” said Dana, blinking and wondering what kind of jokes Alice was
thinking about. A grin formed on her features and she said, “But I do
know a really bad lesbian joke. Want to hear?”
“Go for it,” said Alice with an encouraging smile, tracing circles on
the small of Dana’s back as the athlete pressed closer. “I’m ready to
groan at the semi-offensive jokey badness.”
Clearing her throat and looking humorously solemn enough that Alice
fixed a fond gaze onto her and smiled, Dana said, “What do you call a
lesbian dinosaur?”
“I don’t know, what?” replied Alice, rolling her eyes slightly and
waiting for the all too predictable punch line which she suspected she
already knew.
“Lickalottapuss,” said Dana eagerly, wearing a big grin and giggling
when Alice did in fact groan and flopped her head back into the pillows
while closing her eyes. Sliding up the blonde’s body, Dana kissed her
neck and murmured, “I told you it was bad.”
“I was expecting you to say Clitasaurus Erect though,” said Alice,
popping open one eye to smirk as Dana gaped at her. “What?” she lightly
teased. “Don’t tell me you’ve never heard that version of the joke.
What about Tristrapitanon? Have you heard that one?” When Dana
continued to gape at her, Alice’s smile became entirely mischievous as
she continued, “How about Vaginenraptor? Rugmunchetterlus? You know
those?”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!