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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Even if they were able to take away Dana’s disease and the problems
that had led to their break up they still had a myriad of obstacles to
overcome. And while Alice was nervous about their chances of beating
all of them, she had a slowly building confidence that they could. They
no longer took the chance of guessing what the other was thinking or
feeling, instead they simply asked. Their separation had taken away
that lazy habit of assumption. But nevertheless, just thinking of a few
of those upcoming obstacles did create a small hurricane of anxiety in
Alice’s stomach. Things such as her almost impossible task of getting
Dana’s parents to stand her presence after all that she had done to
their daughter. Many people loved to harp on how their in-laws hated
them but she doubted that they ever had to admit there was good reason
behind that opinion like she herself did. But all the same, Alice
didn’t want to try and change their minds. They had every right to hate
her and the blonde wasn’t that fond of taking away people’s rights. But
she did hope they could manage to be civil around each other if only
for Dana’s sake. Knowing how much the athlete’s parents truly did love
her, Alice didn’t think that would be a problem. If it was, then
without a doubt, Howie would be there to come to her assistance at the
very least. So she wasn’t entirely alone in waging what was sure to be
an epic uphill battle to gain some small measure of parental tolerance.
Smiling softly as Dana muttered under her breath and shifted in her
embrace, Alice knew that whatever she had to go through would be worth
the price if it helped to keep this woman in her life and in her arms.
There was another bleary mumble and blue eyes slowly fluttered open to
look up at Alice. A slow smile working its way across her features, the
tennis player reached out to gently press the palm of her hand against
Alice’s cheek. “I thought you were a dream,” she shyly confessed, face
reddening slightly and she hid against the writer’s chest. “When I was
first waking up I thought that but then I smelled you and I knew you
had to be real.”
“You
smelled me,” Alice echoed in supremely dry tones. When the only
response she got was Dana snuggling even closer and the sound of a
muffled giggle, Alice mock scowled and tickled the athlete in her
sides. Chuckling when Dana gave a yelp and looked up at her with
irritation, she said, “Don’t get pissy with me. I’m the one who just
got called smelly.”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!