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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Upon walking into the living room she stopped at the sight of Alice
staring at a picture. Dana had only recently pulled it out of her
personal hiding spot to place it proudly on the mantle. It was one of
them shortly after they had become a couple, lying in bed on their
backs, Alice holding the camera above them and Dana curled into her,
both beaming happily.
Stopping at Alice’s side and wrapping her up in an embrace from behind,
Dana kissed the blonde’s neck and waited for the other woman to speak.
“I thought this picture was gone,” said Alice, looking up at the
athlete with confused eyes.
“I have the negatives for most of our pictures,” replied Dana, focusing
on it as Alice set it back down. “That one was my favorite so I had
another copy made for myself.” She paused for a moment and debated on
whether or not to ask before finally deciding if they were really going
to be able to do this, to be together again, really and truly there had
to be no secrets and they had to try their best to lose this hesitation
between them. Which is why she buried her face the soft crown of dark
blonde hair and asked, “Why would you think it was gone?” Alice started
to reply but shut her mouth and her expression grew distant and Dana
sighed before she pressed a tender kiss to the writer’s jaw. When Alice
turned to look at her, she murmured, “I want to know, Al. I don’t want
you to not tell me things because you’re scared I’ll be hurt by them.
Not being close to you and not knowing these things, that hurts so much
more.”
“Helena and I threw it out,” said Alice, sounding reluctant and sad,
just so incredibly sad to be saying this to Dana. “We threw away all of
my pictures of you… of us… it was on the same day I dumped all the
toys on you and Lara in The Planet.”
“I remember,” said Dana quietly, shutting her eyes at the memory. She
had been so very frustrated with Alice in those days and the all too
public dumping of their sex toys in The Planet hadn’t really helped
matters. “She was waiting for you, right? She drove you there.”
“Yeah,” Alice replied wryly, unable to help smiling a little bit when
she thought of Helena’s incredible good humor and seemingly limitless
patience with her in those times. “She wanted to make sure I really
gave them all back. It wasn’t like I had a good track record of letting
anything involving you go at that point. Helena sort of had to
supervise, I guess.”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!