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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“She’s a good friend,” said Dana in something of a hush and the way the
tennis player sounded made Alice turn around to look at her with dark
and worried eyes. Ducking her head and sorting through her thoughts,
Dana lifted her gaze and looked at the blonde with a sober and serious
stare. In a tender caress, she ran the back of her fingers down Alice’s
cheek as she murmured, “I know we can’t go back and change things. That
we can’t be best friends again and I know Helena has taken my place
there but I don’t want that, Al. I want us to be better than we were
before and I love our friendship but I want us to be more than that. I
want us to be friends, lovers, girlfriends, and just everything else we
could be for each other. I think maybe,” Dana paused for a moment to
lightly bite her bottom lip in consideration. “Maybe what happened was
sort of good because we’ve seen everything bad. How we acted, how we
treated one another, it was probably the worst from both of us and
we’re here anyway.” Smiling bright and brilliant, Dana laughed happily
when Alice returned the smile just as brightly. “We’ve seen the worst
and we still love each other and we still want to be together. So maybe
it all had a reason, you know?”
“I do know,” said Alice in warm tones and her expression was
understanding and loving. Reaching out to hook her fingers into the
belt loops to Dana’s pants, she pulled the athlete towards her and
continued in a husky murmur, “And I agree.”
“As long as we’re in agreement,” Dana said, lifting an eyebrow and
chuckling, pressing her hand against Alice’s pale neck and smiling at
the steady pulse she felt there.
“Complete agreement,” drawled Alice before she grinned mischievously
and leaned forward to capture Dana’s lips for a slow and detailed kiss.
Sighing in pleasure and a low moan rising up in her throat, Dana opened
her mouth and sucked on Alice’s tongue by way of invitation. The blonde
rose into her embrace, slipping her hands underneath Dana’s shirt,
rejoicing in the familiar touch of tanned skin. Moving together in a
stumbling walk, they smiled into one another’s kisses as they slowly
made their way towards the stairs leading to the athlete’s bedroom.
With a slight thump, Dana found herself pressed against the wall and
she grinned wide and happy. Just so utterly happy, until she noticed
Alice didn’t have her head ducked down to kiss or suck on her neck, she
was simply resting there, taking deep breaths and appearing as if she
was trying to calm herself down. Frowning at this, not grasping why
exactly the writer would feel such a need since it was the very last
thing that she wanted at this moment, Dana slid her hand under Alice’s
chin, tilting her head up to meet their eyes.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!